Not a bad story! It would be better if you seperated everyone's lines. Put them on different lines, and not in the same paragraph.

That was a great story i really liked it alot. i'll be sure to check out more of your stories.
Buh-Bye

Oh. Oh dear. *sobs* TISSUES! TI-SUES!
It's so...sad...!

Once again... wow... I love your stories... This is not the typical Remus/Sirius... I loved it!!! Okay repeating myself here... *grin*

A lovely story, very interesting angle that's a bit refreshing from some of the more 'overused' Remus/Sirius story ideas (not that I mind any overuse of them, mind you! :D). I enjoyed it muchly, though as someone else mentioned, it'd be nice if you fixed the formatting of the story to make it easier to read instead of puzzling over the mistakes. :) Keep it up! :D

That was....really sad! ;_; Good job! Just make sure to seperate dialogue of different people into different paragraphs. ^_^

I'm afraid I can't read this. I think you must have been using smart quotes, because every time there's a non-ascii character, it turns to gibberish.

Beautiful. That was a lovely story. I think that the ending left room for a very nice sequel *hint hint*. I like how you portray both Remus and Sirius, but particularly Remus. He's my favorite of the two! And they are my favorite slash pairing. :-) Wonderful job.

aaaaaaah, you do slash, you do slash, you do slash!!!!!!! worship worship worship......I LOVE SLASH!!!!!!!sorry, i honestly would write more, but i'm being moaned at for beimg online too long, so i gotta go :( i'll reply soon to your e-mail, honest i will....

Well, because I'm a nice and helpful person (ah-HEM), I'll review. Very sweet.I'm a sucker for a romance, any romance (almost) and you have a nice writing style. Were they in a cottage?

I think author alerts have gone wrong again... I haven't been receiving any alerts lately!!! =( Anyways, I'm glad I found this story! Congrats! This was really cool! Very well written!

Interesting and very well written. However, I'm not sure if I likfe the idea of Remus Lupin and Sirius Black being homosexual. It just doesn't seem right, to me, somehow. But very well written!

Ooohh. That's nice! Pretty sad... The only thing wrong with that pairing is that I don't get either of them...