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Reviews For: The Immortals
Veglma 2008-09-20 . chapter 1
Interesting, very interesting.

*is curious on how Asuka would be like here when she finally appears*

(And awesome. Shinji is actually bad-**. XD)
NateGold 2005-01-14 . chapter 1
This is a story which I keep coming back to and love more each time I read it. It's what I would call "EVA outside the box" in that it takes the EVA cast, throws out the usual framework and takes things in a completely new and fresh direction. The world it's set in is easily visualized and realistic, the characterizations strong. I also love that Shinji is now a force to be reckoned with. Word choice and narrative flow are exceptional. I can't wait for you to update this, the sooner the better!
Duke-of-Argyle 2004-05-19 . chapter 1
An excellent start ta a great story. I cant wait ta see what happens, and for asuka ta return. good work, tell me when ya update!
-the duke-
reader 2004-04-28 . chapter 1
The characters may be OOC, but then again she scope of the story is outside the EVA timeline anyway.
The only word I can really use to describe this fic would be that its different. And I dont mean that in a bad way. I hope it isnt a Asuka/Shinji pairing though, I think the story would be really good with our without pairs.
reader 2004-04-28 . chapter 1
The characters may be OOC, but then again she scope of the story is outside the EVA timeline anyway.
The only word I can really use to describe this fic would be that its different. And I dont mean that in a bad way. I hope it isnt a Asuka/Shinji pairing though, I think the story would be really good with our without pairs.
Kalrak 2004-04-23 . chapter 1
OMFG, is this from the Black Company? Now that would be interesting! I wonder though, are we going to see some other characters from the Company?
Gopu 2004-04-22 . chapter 1
Looking forward to more.
SinRaven 2004-04-21 . chapter 1
Simply, extrodinary. A reality in which the different past/reality is clashed as memories a shinji of change, to remember a world in which people forgot.
Update soon?
Evangelion Fanboy,
Arrot Zang
Lord Raa 2004-04-21 . chapter 1
I must confess that I was wondering "where is this going? Is this more than a simnple AU?"
I was tempted to stop reading this, but it was written well enough to keep my interest and towards the end, I felt sufficiently rewarded for my effore. Enough of my questions were answered, yet more were raised.
I commend you on you hook.
I look forward to reading more of this one.
That is all for now.
dennisud 2004-04-21 . chapter 1
I know what your trying to do and i wish you well. I think the idea of dropping the cast into a medievil era after TI is interesting though it will be hard to pull off simply because there will be various amounts of OOC due to three faacts you have already said.
If it's beleivable the it will fly!
Oh and don't forget "The Game" please!
dennisud
kman 2004-04-20 . chapter 1
I love the story so far.Its anew take set in a medevil setting that few writers have tried and never complited.I hope you finish thr story because as of now its on my top ten list.
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