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| Pensulliwen 2008-06-24 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story, very fun little peak into Kaito's head. |
| Snickerer 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseHeh. ‘Pretty’ and ‘Philosophical’ are not words I normally associate with each other. You’ve made me come dangerously close to changing that permanently. |
| Rocket Knight CJ 2005-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. The ending amused me... one of those "duh" moments. ^__^ I don't know TOO much about Kaitou yet (although I'm spoiling myself to death reading your/Becky's fanfics...), but I also have to say, he's my favorite character. Excellent writing! |
| fireblazie 2004-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting! ^_^ I haven't actually READ Magic Kaito or seen enough of Detective Conan to see the Kid make his appearance... but judging from the fanfics I've read, he's already my favorite character. ^_^ |
| Anica106 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good; you write wonderful one-shots. I like the way you portrayed Kaitou; you're very natural speaking with his voice. I also liked how you didn't push too hard and make the apparant mood of the fic too serious. You just let him talk, and it was just enough to make it sad in a gentle sort of way. And I really didn't mean to talk this long, sorry. ^_^ But I lived this; please keep up the good work. |
| Namonaki Pharaoh 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is really insightful, I like it alot! Well written too! ^^ ~*Pharaoh |
| Robin Cross 2004-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWell,another great story;) Among all the DC-fans,I have someone I admire for his anlytic skills. But, none the less,when I read you, I feel,as if Aoyama-sensei would learn perfectly English,and would dare to explain the motives of his characters.And for that,I really feel joy,whenever I can read you.I hope you will keep up the good pace,and share us great moments;) |
| Akuma-sama 2004-04-29 ch 1, | abuseAnd once again you show what powerful grasp you have on the DC cast, Ysabet-sama. Lovin' it... but get back to windfall? And Blowing Out the Candles, I can't wait to see how THAT turns out ^_^ Oops, g2g... school time T_T ~Akuma-sama, the demon lord |
| Tamara Schillinger 2004-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi Ysabet^-^ This monologue of Kaito is really good! It shows good what the boy behind the monocle is thinking. Sorry, I would like to write you much more about this little monologue, but my english is'nt good enough, and because I'm at school at the moment, I haven't any dictionary^^" Cu Tami-chan^-^ |
| Belena 2004-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseYet another excellant job! I really liked the characterization. It's all believable, especially section where he explains why he doesn't wear the Kid outfit at his house. That was nice. Very descriptive, and it lead to a nice transitions back and forth between his different thoughts. You really got into his head and wrote it all out in an interesting and creative manner, it all flows smoothly. I liked the reasons that you gave for his actions because they were well thought out and they made sense. Good Job! (^_^) This was a good one! Now I can't wait to see what you do with your others! (^_^) |
| Summercloud 2004-04-22 ch 1, | abuse"Though… when the goal’s finished, I wonder what I’ll have left? Never mind. Not important." Ye. Gods. I don't know why this struck me so hard-- maybe it's the totally offhand attitude Kaito has about it-- anyway, very nice line. Cute fic! A nice combination of humor and morbidity, in a Kaito sort of way. Thank you for posting. Although things like this make me despair of ever being any good. ::sigh:: Never give up! Never surrender! Right? Right! Thanks. |
| Loqi 2004-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseQuite like the old woman part, heh. And you do such a good Kaito voice. Had much fun reading it. |
| Dogmatix 2004-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHe! Does Kaito need to get checked for glasses? *snicker* Love that last line *g* And that is a veddy nice peek into Kaito's head, with all the angst, twisty bends, and Just Plain Weird that's cooped up in there. ^_^ |
| Hi no Kasumi 2004-04-20 ch 1, | abuseAn unexpected story, but extremely well-written. I love reading stories that explore a character's thoughts and motives. And while it's not something I've ever really pondered (I haven't been exposed to the actual MK, just ff), it's an interesting read. ^_^ Loved it! |
| Icka M. Chif 2004-04-20 ch 1, | abusedude... you do realise just how much you rule, right? |