You managed to catch the characterization of Grissom and Sara perfectly. That phonecall was very powerful and intense. My eyes never left the screen while reading. I truly hope you are considering another chapter or a sequel. Great job!

This fic was great! I say it deserves a sequel, or at the least another chapter. After the point of view that we have all had following Butterflied your fic is like a breath of fresh air. It brings a smile to my face. The only problem that I saw with it was the dialogue. You were using 'apostrophes' instead of the "quotes" you should have been using. Other than that it was a great fic. Thanks for sharing.
Suzy

This was magnificent. Beautifully written. You really captured their tentativeness and fears. I'd love to read another chapter or sequel to this. To see how a 'face to face' resolution would go--and maybe that breakfast. You created such a great feeling in this fic, that I want it to continue. Wonderful job.

Great story, loved it.

That was great! I hope you continue this story or write a sequel. I want to see what develops between them after this. For someone new to a ship, you did a great job!