Hilarious.

ROTFLMAO!! I'm not sure if it's supposed to, but this one made me laugh hard. Must be the sudden change of 'roles'. It's kinda nice that you mixed a bit of yaoi into the non-yaoi, there's so little of that around now. (I'm both a yaoi and non-yaoi fan.) Thanks for bridging the gap!

Yes! 5x2! And I actually like the 1xR in this. Good work!

When you told me about it, I thought it was going to be dull (I swear), you surprised me. Anyway 1) doing both of them at the same time (with you switching in the middle) was sometimes confusing, but it's a song fic and it went along pretty well. 2) I usually don't read this kind of thing (I think you know what I don't read about it... if not, I'll enlighten you later) but you managed to make me read through the end... when I learned it was a songfic and a *Celine Dion* one I had it pinned in my head that I wouldn't get past the first lines. You proved wrong. 3) As usual great work :) 4) If Trowa and Quatre were trying to sleep... shouldn't they have just gone in with the crowd(the flow, whatever)??? :) (they'll be happier) but then... the ending wouldn't be the same, so I guess I'm semi-okay with the ending. That's all... I guess :)

I don't know what to say..man, that was just wonderful! damnit...2x5 forever! heh, dont' mind me..

Well it was funny at the end, mostly just silly. I think Trowa and Quatre should've forgotten about sleep and had their own fun.

good

kawaii!

for someone who wrote her first lime yaoi fic, you've actually laid out the ***king scenes quite well. funny end. My jaw dropped when it was a heero-relena. yeck! poor trowa and quatre.

hey- yaoi and non-yaoi-- and a song fic! very well done, and i think this piece makes everyone happy, except for quatre (and i agree with him, it was an injustice!)...i normally hate the h/r pairing, but the fic as a whole was so well done that it didn't bother me...please write more, this was very good

*lol* This is kawaii! Wufei and Relena in *leather*!!! *lmao* Next time, write a 1xR, 5x2 and 3x4 all together!!!

Awww! I can forgive the 1xR. (Sorry, just don't like it. No offense or anything.) There's 2x5/5x2!!! ^_^ ^_^ Well done for the first yaoi you've written. ^_^