 ozlady80 2009-09-08 . chapter 31I know i am reading this story right now but i just wanted to tell you i loved this story! You did a wonderful job with the love that letty and dom have for eachother. One can only wish for that love for someone intheir lives. Thank you for a beautiful story! |
 Santiva Potter 2009-08-17 . chapter 31This was beautiful. Great work.
Much Love,
Santiva Potter |
 Santiva Potter 2009-08-17 . chapter 1Just the simple idea of Dominic getting the paddle is so damn funny! It almost makes me wanna cry! Nice beginning, I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Much Love,
Santiva Potter |
 PrincessCheese 2009-07-09 . chapter 31It's five years later adn this story is still without compare. it is my favourite FF story in the world and I have read it again and again. |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 31Great chapter and amazing fan fiction. First before I get into the chapter I wanted to say that I've read a lot of Dom and Letty fan fictions, but this is easily my faovrite. Each chapter was long and exciting and I liked it a lot. You had a good story going and it never got boring!! OK on to the chapter. I liked it in the begning when DOm says that he wants them to wear the wedding rings!! Oh and lol at Mia when she ses the rings. All this time I thought that they knew about Dom and Letty lol. I guess not. Oh and I love it when LEtty is like we have been married for a while and Mia is like say what? lol. Oh and I also liked it when Letty goes after Vince and then she says that if Brian has to be in the wedding that he will be somethin not impotant like an usher.lol. Well I wanted to say again that this was anamazing fan fiction and I like it so much!! Also I saw what you said tat the end that you have another Dom and Letty fan fiction writen as soon as im done with writing this review im going to go and see if you have it up and im going to go and read it!! =) and again great and amazing job with this fan fiction! =) |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 30Great chapter and one I wanted to say that I thought this part was really when LEtty was thinking it:
Ointment. That's one ** weird word.
lol sorry i thought it was really fun and I also thought the part when Letty said that she owed Leon new seats mates and then Mia is like hmm funny that's what he said.lol. Oh and I feel bad for Letty that her mom died and her grandma moved. Oh and I wanted to say near the endish I love the part when Letty is like give me more credit than Leon. Then she is like I mean now maybe Jesse. Then Vince is on the floor laughing.lol. Oh and lol when Mia comes in. It's just like when Dom's dad walked in on them in the first chapter!! lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter and it sucks that the next chapter is the last chapter though!! |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 29Great chapter. Oh and I wanted to say that I so love Letty's mom in this chapter. That she is making Letty go back over to Dom to talk to each other. I know think that they will get back together. Unless you put some big suprise in it and they start fighting but I dount that will happen. Can't wait to see what will happen as Dom and Letty talk!! =) |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 28Great chapter. I like it that the whole thing with Dom and Letty was a set up. That Mia took Letty there and I'm guessing that the guys took DOm there. Also I like it that Dom and Letty are at least talking now. Hopefully they will get through it soon. Oh and lol about Letty in this chapter. She gets mad at Dom cause he wont have sex with her and she was the one that said that shouldn't be having sex.lol. Well great chapter it sucks that there are only like 3 or 4 chapters left. Can't wait to read the next chapter though!! =) |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 27Great chapter. I'm glad that Letty and Dom are trying to work things out. Its still sad that she wont be at the garage and working for Dom anymore. Also I love Mia so much at the end of this. When she brings Dom in by the ear to Letty.lol. I really hope that Dom and Letty will be able to work things out. Oh and a trail seperation. I wish that they didn't get seperated at all, but hopefully it will work out for the best. Oh and I liked it that Dom was wearing the wedding ring. Can't wait to read the next chapter to see what will happen with Dom and Letty!! =) |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 26Oh no you left it at a huge cliffhanger! At first I thought that Letty and Dom were getting somewhere. They were in the bath together. They were talking and everything. I thought that everything would be slowly getting better with them. No they can't get a divorce. Letty better not say that she wants her and Dom to get a divorce!! I really can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Letty says. I think she might say that she just wants time to breathe and to get away from him. |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 25Oh wow great chapter!! I had a feeling that Dom would come and try and talk to Letty when her and Leon went away. Oh and at the end I don't want her to want Dom to leave. I want them to fix it and get back together. Something tells me that Dom will actually listen to her now and leave her. Can't wait to read the next chapter!! =) |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 24Great chapter. Oh and I relazied that when you said in a few chapters ago that the team talked her outta it. They were talking her outta telling Dom. also it was really nice of LEtty to do all that work when she was away. I feel bad that she said that she did it for Dom when he got out. Oh and I had a feeling that Dom would come when Letty was at the house. Can't wait to read the next chapter and see waht happens when her and Leon get back1! =) |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 23Great chapter. I still feel really really bad for Letty and Dom is being such and ** to her. Oh and I thought that Dom already knew who Leon was, cuz he fired him earlier. Oh well. Oh and I love Leon in this chapter. That he says that he is going with LEtty!! I thought that maybe Letty was thinking of going to go back with Adrian when she was talking to him and thinking about it in her head. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I think that DOm will come home while Letty is in the house getting her stuff. |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 22Oh wow good chapter. Ok so Letty did go into the Army. Wow I'm so ** at Dom right now. When she isn't there he flips out and gets all these girls like he did before him and Letty got togehter. Oh and lol. I love Leon so much in this chapter and also Jesse when they were talking about it. Oh and I wonder what Dom and Letty are going to do because really they are married now. I'm still ** at Dom. I can't even see them getting back together now. Oh and I feel so bad for Letty to. She comes back and she sees that Dom is with a girl. Oh and also cuz she is crying so much right now. CAn't wait to read the next chapter and see waht happens. |
 degrassijayandalex 2009-06-07 . chapter 21Great chapter. So wait I'm guessing that since LEtty said that the team talked her outta it. That she isn't going to the Army anymore?!?! Also it sucks for the team that they are doing so bad on money and stuff hopefully you will make Dom come back soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter!! =) |