Cute!

aw, so sweet. I hope you add more soon, it'd be nice to see a little more into Fred's past. Oh...and dont complain about gettin the eps later than USA. We in aus get them later than YOU...the ep in question is on THIS WEEK here...hm okay...I'll stop rantin now :o)

thats sweet...

*sobs*... I miss Fred! That was so cute! And Fred's parents are just adorable!

You know, if you wanted to make Roger's Miss Texas dream come true, you could have him enter Fred in either a baby or 'Little Miss' beauty pageant when she was very young. Then again, she's pretty shy so it would probably end in tears.

aww...continue!

You know, I've always thought Fred was Lindsey's sister and they were separated by Child Welfare when she was quite young--maybe 4 or so. I can believe that she'd wave at them on the sonogram! This is very sweet.

Ohh, beautiful story, and cute. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love Fred! So a fanfic about her is a great idea! I think you should create an amusing taco explanation, also, in "Spin the bottle", there was hints at drug use, which should be brought in too! (I'm from England too, and it sux when we get episodes later than everyone else!)

I gave it a shot, but I honestly can't read more. You know how you feel when people write English-ness all wrong? Your 'Texas' version of Fred's parents is even worse than the show's version on Texas. It makes me want to chuck giant cement blocks at the story in general. First of all, people in Texas do NOT talk like that. It's very rare to find ANYONE who says 'ain't.' People don't generally say 'darn' or 'hintin' something awful.' This is more or less the equivalent of having some British person going around saying "pip pip cheerio, old boy," or some other ridiculous thing like that that american people seem to think you guys say. Writing out accents is always annoying, no matter what the accent. How would you like to read someone trying to WRITE OUT a British accent? Like if I had someone calling someone else "darling" and continually spelled it as "dahrling" or something weird like that? Grr. !!

Are you going to have Fred doing experiments when she's really little? That would be cute, especially if she was experimenting with fire or chemicals or something equally dangerous. Her poor parents living in fear of her burning the house down.
PS. Sorry for all the reviews, I keep thinking of stuff that I should have said in the first one but didn't.

Are you planning on explaining the origins of Fred's taco obsession?
A history of Fred could be lots of fun. She strikes me as having been the type of child who could wrap her parents around her little finger without them even realising it. It would be cool to see her getting up to mischief and getting into trouble.

awwe

Very sweet. I wonder if Fred knows how narrowly she escaped being 'Janey Burkle'. I read once that Fred graduated from high school before her fifteenth birthday, so are you going to write her as a baby genius? I'd also be interested in learning why Winifred was shortened to 'Fred' rather than 'Winnie' or 'Win'.
Please update soon.

Oh God, this already has me tearing up and its only the first chapter. Beautiful writing, you really really captured the Burkles in all their loving-Texan-quirkiness.
Kinda heartbreaking now that we know how this story's going to end up.
Please continue, I need me some happy Fred before Illyria puts my heart through the wringer again.