i see u finally finished it. it was pretty good. what r u gonna write next? u should finish that one story that u let me read. the one about Nahz,Marcus,Kelly,Amanda(?),and Brandon. sorry that the Medieval Fair sucked. oh well. c-ya later! oh e-mail me so i have a good reason to get on the net, k?
~linz~

This story is great! It's exciting and mysterious! I watch Early Edition every time i get the chance so it's nice to read a story by someone who likes the show as much as I do! Keep writing!
Lucas

rae i mean " I AM GRUMPY-BEAR". Thanks for using my medication idea in chapter 10. did you get the "Chapel" idea from St.Mary's? i'm lovin' the story and i can't wait to read more! p.s. i found some info on the church and found a picture (blurred slightly)of the inside! i gtg! linz

This was a really a extremely good story! Early Edition is my favorite show, and you represented it well in your story. It was very creative.
Frank of New Jersey

hey! well i loved the first chapter. Will i like the rest? Just kidding! keep up the good work! See ya at track practice!

I like it a lot. You're talented and the plot is very intriguing.
Keep writing! :-)

WOW! This is a great story.You have definately worked ** it. It was very suspenceful and on the edge of your seat exciting! I am surprised no one has reviewed this story. Come on people! You are missing out on a great story. I have read other stories of yours. You are a very gifted and talented writer! Keep plugging away on the story. I will read more when you have more posted. Hopefully it will be soon!(p.s. Ice Cream)
Hannah