This was hilarious. I loved this story. I could use a bit more detail as to who Carly and Adam are though.

Well written, but it was supposed to be from Lance's POV, right? I don't think he'd ever use the words "mistaken" or "yielded", things like that.
And I guess it was way more confusing to me because I don't know who the Misfits are. I mean, I've heard of them, but I don't really know that much about them ^_^
I liked it!
~~RM~~

Oh this is nuts! I love it! You should do more of these! Keep going!