I'm swearing in multiple languages. I doubt it's a pleasant sight to behold.

Two chapters left... AND YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN THREE YEARS!?!?!?

((returns to cursing))

I warned you I would be maniacally enraged should I reach the final chapter and find that the fic isn't over, but hasn't been updated in FOREVER!

UPDATE! PLEASE! ((sobs uncontrollably)) I'm begging you...

~ Umbrae Calamitas (angry and sobbing and swearing and such)

Live long. Live well. Write.

That was cute. ^^

I don't get the # by the lyrics, though. Is there a purpose to them?

You also kinda messed up on the italic switching with the song/story, but that's ok.

Also, I want to sit on that hill!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

In my opinion, so long as it is written well and is interesting, it can never be too long. Short fanfics tend to annoy me, so I enjoy the length of this fic. I'm also so excited - I love Joey. And the way you write him... it's so good.

On top of all that, it's hard to find well-written fics with good amounts of drama, but still happy endings (so far).

So, I am happy. What a great chapter.

I was kinda... freaked out by the storm. Kinda mirrors an incident in one of my novels, which stems from my own hydrophobia. Heh. Very nice. I was worried Yugi was going to get taken away; I like it better when he and Yami are together. ^_^

ONWARD!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

That was AWESOME! Yeah, take that Tea, you **! (I actually like her, except in your fic, lol. Though, Yami/Yugi forever. ^_^)

And Seto, in your face! Joey ROCKS!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

Aw, it wasn't that bad. The whole demon lusting for Seto was relatively gross, but understandable. He didn't actually die, though, did he? Did he actually run away? What a wimp.

Anyway, I liked the chapter, so don't beat yourself up.

I was also beginning to like Seto, but he redeemed himself as an ** in the end. Heh. Figures.

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

((is trying very hard not to scream))

I can't tell if the scream would be from horror... or from OMGWTFTHISISAWESOMENESS!

Probably the latter.

I know Joey will be fine.

((glare))

Joey better be fine. If he's not fine, I'll eat your soul. Mwahahahaha!

Ahem... next chapter, shall we?

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

I hope your bad mood is over and all the good moods are back. And now... ahem...

OMGWTFLINESFROMTHEMUMMYRETURNSYAY!

^^ I'm literally bouncing in my chair. Can't take long to write this review, must go to next chapter... must, must, must, must...

By the way, there's no little thingy that says COMPLETE, so if I hit the last chapter and find out that you haven't updated in 3 years and it's not finished, be assured that I shall be **. ^_^ Okie dokie?

This fic rocks!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

OMG! THAT WAS GREAT!


ONWARD!

I'm not bothering with my sig, it's too damn long... next chap!

Please update

LONG FB ALERT!
"Bakura merely smirked at Yugi who he was the only one that he felt closer to asides from his aibou." - I guess getting his ** kicked can do that to you :P
Chap 5 with Kaiba's interest and everything that went on, mostly the confusion and small but not much in the way of revelations to the others was good. Chap6 brought more questions into the mix but the interaction of everyone here was well done...still keeping most of them in the dark which is good and then having Yami's magic combine with Yugi's family or whatever.

Joey and Ryou really gave humour and insanity to this, it helped move things along and not get suck & depressed in the mud! The trick with Seto in cages in no.8 was ingenious and all those promises...and I can just imagine a chibi Seto too. No9 was not crap! The song for Tea, the recorded her voice bit was cool, but Yugi's speech and then the song itself just made me want to cringe...bad idea.

Its like its own lttle series. No.12 was like the perfect calm before the storm, all of it was amusing and light. Ishtar cuddling & possessiveness over a pillow is adorable and the clocks fit in just so, also liked Malik's comment that disowning Isis "dun't work" :P

Yami's clone in 15 was cool, though where did Yugi get Yin's sword? They didn't have it before did they? Everythings piecing together like a perfect jigsaw...no really I'm impressed. All interaction between Yami's &Hikari's is the best! Ryou's moments in 15 are hilarious. Joey's time in soul room, mixup on mountain with Katsuya and those memories, just great.
Seto's POV in general was exceptional, particularly his growing feelings towards Joey, and why is Joey constantly saving Mokuba(no one else does just him)?!
It took awhile for me to figure out this bodyguard in white & in understanding Ryou and Malik's involvments.

And in chap17 it was where everything from both parties was starting to connect together in places, quite confusing trying to work it all out & remeber people, whose Shizuka again? I take it its because of forgotten memories that the Yami's didnt remember Ryou & Malik as Rei & Ishizu from before? So um how is it that memory banks start 4 d Yami's? or is that 'other' forces at work...that underground passage cant have led them ALL the way to the monastery?

By time we get to 18 it feels almost like the whole neglect, Tea, and band incident is part of another story-and yet its still the same, possibly a problem that things seem to be moving so far away from where they began and nothing appearing to link them.
That bit with Joey turning Katsuya in19 was cool and Malik's well done Yami was extremely funny. As well as Yin's antics to Atemu! But what exactly is meant by 'twin weapons' that Yami&Yugi are suppose to have?

The ending to Seto/Joey was brilliant (are you sure they were only a side story?)-I absolutely adored Seto in this one, everything fitted together, all those dragon's helping and Joey's and Katsuya's efforts were all really good. Though until you made Seto realise I hadnt guessed Kat was a girl or the actaul signifance of that painting :)

Those bits in 22 where memories, Kat, Yugi/Yami/Tea bits were a little confusing and didnt really answer very much-is that just me-Ive yet to fully understand why Gabriel is after Yugi or why he the Motou family have had such a problem from these guys? The others reactions to Yami/Yugi's third eyes was cool, Kat/Seto's time and that important flashback was also. Oh & you dont see Yugi biting someone very often but I'm sure he wouldnt mind giving it directly to her ^_-

It dragged a bit over chaps10-12 and seemed to get further away from any and all starting points but I liked how intricately described it is and the idea that other stories of your all connected into it somehow ^_^ But aw man you have got to be kidding me...I know Uni is hard and overworked but if you've only got two chapters left to go can you not finish this! Its gotta be done-you cannot leave it there hanging on such a precipice!
PLEASE tell me you'll update! ::holds best ever read fic award & a mallet for any ingrate who says otherwise::

I love this story! So thought out! So incredibly complicated. Please Update! It's too good of a story to leave it undone. And it seems to close to. Good job on it so far.

*dressed in shining amor, runs over and kills those assweeds who insulted this story*
me; 'there... *turns evil and takes out whip* UpDATE!
I love this story plez plez plez update

Hi! I love this story when i read it before, but why has it not been updated?! Hurry up i wanna see what happens!

"You don't hate me?" Yugi whispered.
They all shook their heads whilst Ishtar nodded.
Malik elbowed him.
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That part was hilarious!

Whoa, Joey's on a mission! //mutters// He'd better not screw it up...

Whoa...Ryou's all Jet Li on their sorry butts!! MUHAHAHA!! Then he says sorry. O_O

Joey's references to The Exorcist are uncanny. -_-U

//le gasp// SERENITY?! You're right- I never saw that coming.