Aww, cutenes. I like the idea, out of them all Touya would be the one to do that. However you need more detail in you work, way to much dialogue. But interesting plot.

One word: awe

What did you do to me? I don't care if you are the authoress you can't go around making people kill themselves. If you do it again I will hunt you down and kill you. And stay away from me and Jin got that? P.S. I am the Touya in this world. I refuse to tel you where I live. Stalker! Are you going to make another one like this? _ I am pissed at you woman!

Aw! Poor Touya. Well at least he knows that he has friends now and that they love him. And I love him too. XD! Great fic! _!

that was so good. i started to cry*sob* great story.

Oh my god! *sobs* This was soo awesome! *sobs* poor Touya! He's got me, too! You are SO on my favorite author list!

This is pretty good. Um, is Shishi another OC in this story, or is he the same one from the D.T. finals? I thought he died.

That was so good!
This wasn't your first angst was it... YOU'RE LIEING!
Please don't kill touya...I dont think he's the suicidal type...