I've read countless fanfiction just trying to find a good willow faith pairing and this was by far the best. There was a great plot that made sense. The characters still sounded and acted like they do in the series which is a skill most good fan fiction writers lack. This was an amazing story and I can't wait to read more :).

Loved it. This and the one before it are going on my favourites list.

Wine and vanilla,

Professor Drusilla W.L. Silvers

lovin' this stuff. aw poor Faith.:(

AW! thats too cute. good job so far, but be careful on the characters so they are not too unlike themselves. i like the new Faith, it is not too far fetched, she is in a place i can actually see her in. Keep going, this is great!
Phoenix

bravo! i'm enjoying your writing very much.

nice start on this one and still writing Kennedy to my liking.

This might be decent, but I can't tell because of the formatting. You should work this into separate paragraphs for dialogue, etc.