nice story. its pretty good. :)

u really should update...

update.

dude, start friggin' updating b4 u lose all ur readers.

update. luvin' it. just 1 question: does Trunks start smokin' somethin? hope not, man. that would b bad.

f*ing update! Gawd, I seriously want to read the 2nd chappie so PLEASE update! For the sake of my SANITY!...uhm...yeah...

We! I love your stories. That was a very very good one.
I am sorry about your mother, and I know that a simple 'sorry' won't mean much. But I am glad you are writing again.
And, I really hope you don't delete your other stories. Even though what people said, they are some of the BEST Cowboy Bebop stories I've ever read. Also, I never even considered Spike/Ed pairings but that has to be one of the best ones I've ever read. Please continue your other stories and this one too!
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Cristy

Very good...sounds funny...Get writing!
My Rating:5.5/10
NamelessName

I like this story. Its alot better than most of those fluffed up stories that are supposed too be drama/angst/tragedy. It seems too me at the moment more real. any-way, great story so far.
Ps. ALL HAIL MARILYN MANSON!