I like it, what more can i say? i like the idea of a Bof1 novelization, so please don't give up. I am eagerly awaitng the next chapter ^_^

One of the rare stories that keep me reading to the end

This certainly looks promising. It's a rare sight to see a BoF1 novelization so I hope you keep this going. The dialogue's good and the descriptions are nice. Keep up the good work. If you could review my story I'd be much obliged.

OMG! I LOVE THIS! This is a great beginning to this! Please keep on writing this! You're great!