Ed's cluelessness almost seems forced by the end of the story but the middle part with Roy's innuendoes and teasing was very, very funny.

I almost had fears you were going to turn it into slash but was pleased (sort of) with the outcome.

Sad little story and I enjoyed it a lot.

That story was so cool. I loved it. Ed and Winry make the best couple, even if she is taller than him... (sweatdrop) And that kiss was just so cute! I wish I was Winry... sigh

i remember reading this on Scimitar Smile during the Green Lion contest. ahh, i loved this story. it was so sweet and melancholy at the same time. i really hope that you would perhaps write an epilogue? but seeing that this hasn't been touched for a long time, chances are no eh? but it wouldn't be a bad idea to continue it! >

That was wonderful :'( bit of sad but still wonderful. But you aren't supposed to just stand there when your girl runs away >_< Damn that edward... he's so dumb sometimes :/ I'll check your other fics when I get the time

whoa whoa! is that it? c'mon wut happaned.. Did Ed tell Mustang or Did Winry give him a goodbye kiss? O well great story! Hope u continue it and if u do e mail me!

::sniff:: That was so sad... But very well written! Thanks for sharing your fic! Poor Ed...

I thought it was pretty good. I liked Roy's little innuendo. But, I don't know why everyone keeps making Ed so clueless when it comes to girls and all that stuff. He's 15 years old, so I think he would know at least SOMETHING. But, good story, nonethless. Ed is mine though. So, yeah. >.>

I love this fanfic! congratulations Kiya Sama^^
but, Ed is mine ¬¬ xD
bye xD

Oh, wow. That was great. I like it alot. I prefer Ed to be unattached anyway. x3;

God-damn! I really wanted him to kiss her there.

I think that people should start giving Ed more credit... He can't be *that* clueless, can he!?
Ow, but I liked this story, anyway. It's very sweet and nicely written. Well done! (And good luck with the contest! ^^)

*yells at Ed* You're supposed to go after her, you DOLT!
~_^
But aw, that was a great story... well written and cute plot (I was laughing SO hard when Roy was making all his little comments, and Ed was clueless ^__^)... keep up the great work! ^_^
~Revia