I love seeing this side to BeastBoy! You rock!

It was quite enjoyable, and I'm glad you rewrote this, while keeping the first version up. It's really interesting to see how your writing has progressed in two years+.

sounds lyke BB's pretty gd!

(@ drawlin)

liked first version better, great story

the improvement is amazing, i can't believe the same person wrote it. awesome job!

hehe no explaining needed for the titans, they witnessed the first kiss hehehehe

This has much more detail than the original. I really did enjoy reading it. There's more depth to it than I think you realize. Sincerly, a good read.

nice story... the concept was interesting but honestly i would hav eliked to see this in a longer, more fleshed out form

Great stories i like the second one better but that because it more descriptive than the first.

But both of them were really good and i hope you write more.

Bryan

I liked the 1st one a little bit more, but both works are fantastic. Please continue writing.

o my god this was soo cuite :)

Wow, extremly good fic.

*applaudes* good, the last one was good but thisis much better

Amazing. You've accurately captured the self-hatred of Beast Boy while also capturing his feelings for Raven in his portraits. And of course the final touch brought a great deal of conflict to a fitting conclusion. Thank you.

I like them both, but this was had a lot more depth in it that made it such a great thing to read. I really think it's great that you came back to revise this and made it so that it was compatible you your standards, making it "more you". I think that is important.

I deffidently enjoyed this. Keep on keeping on.