interesting

Awesome story! Keep it up!

This was good a little Jesse hurt/comfort. I hope there is going to be more.

way to go.. very ambitiious and i love it.. I really hope that this will continue into many more chapters. Perhaps where Jesse forms a bond with the hatcj=hling as a result of its being in his body... or maybe he devlops strange... never before seen powers as a result of "incubating" the hatchling... no matter where you go with it i will be eagerly waiting for more!

I have read this one last night but didn't review.
Sorry for that!!
Like this story very very much!!
It is different in a very good way.
It is new and I like it.
Can't recall the term I want to say.
So I simply say:
Please go on!

wow...this is definately different but i love it!
i'm getting confuse though coz this senario with the dragon part is kind of like dinotopia,u know...i'm anticipating e next chpt though...keep up wif e good work...u know how to torture jesse good!*winks*

You've got me intrigued! I'm not sure where this story is going quite yet, but I look forward to reading more!! Thank you!

Wow! What a story. I liked it. Keep up the Jesse stories! K

Ok...this was weird...and..uh well nice...

wow! very cool! are you going to continue w/this? if not, please write something else very soon! :)

Poor Jesse. This was great. Keep up the great work. You did a awesome job with this. :)

That was fantastic. Absolutely amazing. Now get the egg out of Jesse before he gives birth to a dragon, literally.