 John Steppenwolf 2004-04-22 . chapter 1 Wow, that’s one long story. So let’s see. That’s Kumori. From what I gather she’s about the same height as Serena, has the same attitude as Raye & Lita, has white hair like Dais, the Warlord of Venom, and has garnet eyes like Trista. Oh, she’s the same age as the Outers, besides Hotaru not to mention she’s as tall as Hotaru. Sedna wanted their star seeds? Okay. Story was good up until towards, the end, and then it got really lame. You didn’t explain how Heero & Serena got together.
You might want to check your spelling. It’s too and new not two, and knew. No anvils, well how about heavy objects smacking one’s coconut, and as they do that, it plays the NBC chime. Seppuka is the honorable way of killing one’s self. It’s what Japanese warriors do. Well, I think the Romans did it as well. I mean Marcus Antonius did it to avoid capture by Gaius Octavian and his boy Marcus Vipsanius Agrippa. I’m not sure if Marcus Sabinus Rufus, Gaius Maecenas, & Titus Statilius Taurus were there or not.
As for Sedna, well, it’s not how I would’ve imagined her, but hey it’s your character. You do what you want. Currently I'm working on my own Sailor Sedna. She's a cross between Miss Kaoru, Miss Megumi, and the Captain from Spaceship Nadesico. She's like Trista, in that she's quiet and has the backbone of Lady Une.
Keep up the good work. Hope there's more to come. |