LOL that was so funny. I guess you really did explain how inuyasha feels for kagome

LOL! I absolutely loved the 'I guess I'm a weenie' part. The whole thing was wonderful! Great job!

LOVED IT!@!1

I LOVE THE PART THE BOILING FOR GRUEL AND THE PART OF NOT FINDING HIS BODY.

hey!! i absolutly loved this poem! i myself write poetry a lot but i haven't had much luck with posting... yeah but anyway! ^^ great poem, i loved the ending!i hope you write more like it soon. anyway good job!
ja ne!!
kaiya