Beautiful! Nice and short...

quite nice :)

This is the 1st time I've read of Hermione not looking into the mirror, nice take on this challenge! Deb >^..^

89 i believe anyway its good i'm glad you finally updated something anyway read my new story Cross of Jade unless you don't like Tamora Pierce or you do and don't like daine and Numair together anyway bye-bye

Very good, especially in 100 words.
Its says alot.
I too like the 2nd paragraph the best. It really tells alot.
I would have to agree with the other reviewer also that Hermy using the word lover, just dosent seem right. I mean what is she like 13 or 14 in the latest book.
Now if you had made a note that this piece was after your Hermy at hogwarts as the head libaryarian, then i could maybe excpet her using that word.

Not bad..
Would like to see specific reference to HG or SS. But I know this is HGs POV.
Sweet. Funny line about Albus.

interesting...i like the 2nd paragraph, that was really the best one.
but i really can't see HERMIONE saying "lover". it just doesn't seem to work.
read my work, please! (plugplugplug)