I love this fic, I read it a few years ago and was wondering last night what it was and how i wanted to read it again, and then bam, I found it today! Luck must be on my side, for once, anyway love it, glad you wrote it, and now i'm off to look at other fics. At 4:53 in the morning. Yep i'm insane.

Ja ne,

Amber's Arrow

That was so GREAT.
I don't like the TV couple of Yancha and Bulma. I love her with Vegeta.
I love how you wrote it in past than present then past. It adds...sort of...well..Texture to the story.
That is such an awsome story to go with the tho most amasing characters in DBZ. WELL DONE (Loud Clapping) WELL DONE!

^o^ I LIKED THAT STORY! So much. It's a nice alternative from your darker stories!

Luv it! ;)

BUT I could use a sequal...!

~Callista Moon~

This is one of the better BV stories i've read in a long time. It completely completes itself. Like a circle. It does not have a rough ending, but smooths out to a tranqual blurr. Like it didn't even end at all, and you can immagine them out there on the ship. Yeah.. I like this story
thanks.
Rossiette

great story/one shot thingy i think u should continue! bye bye! ;)
-jennifer

please update soon...maria

Amazing! So well written, you have an amazing talent. I love this story (read all 3 chappies at once) I would love for you to write a sequel, or think about writing professionally, b/c you're just that good.

This was one fantastic story! If you can't tell, I really, really, liked it! So since you are finished with this fic, does that mean you will be finishing "Ruthless"? I like what I have read so far on this fic! Actually, I like everything I have read of yours so far. Well, keep up the great work and thank you! ^_^

I loved this story! I'm so glad I decided to read it, if not I would have missed a truly great story! It would be so cool if you did have another one with the squad and all! I'll have to read it if you do! Lol, keep up the great work that I know you will!
b-chan2007

The plot was really nice and different, although there was something that disturbed me: THE ENDING?! Honestly: What were you thinking? (And note that this isn't a flame: Just a bit of fairly (over-)comtemplated critisism) How can Bulma acept to live with a man that has become the very thing that she started out hating: Her father? By returning "The favor" Vegeta became just as cruel as Dr. Briefs. And what will happen when she discovers the malice in Vegeta? Will she still have the warmth that Vegeta admired? Nope, the ending was a bit delusional/illogical, if I may speak out my mind, which I'm doing no matter the objections. Maybe you were too tired to write more at the momemt? What do I know...
Have a nice life, whatever you chose to do.
Signing off : the flying pal aka JQ
Note: (boy do I have a lot of those!) If you can't to make a comeback, you're welcome to do so. Just send me a mail!! But then again: It was different and original, so there: I said something positive! YaY me!

oh my god it´s so beautiful! I love it!

It's a pity this ended so quickly, I was really getting into this. I love the idea of writing in detail of the squads plans on what to do next and how they accept Bulma as the princess, you could easily do that as a continuation to this one. Maybe you could add another threat and include Bulma's scientific knowledge into it, and their children.

Lip-service isn't enough to praise this story. Even with the spellcheck mistakes, I can't get over it. I mean, it's a rational Vegeta and Bulma love story with no horrific realizations or terrific struggles (to a degree). It's refreshing and new. Bravisimo!

Wow! so awsome! veggie finally got his revenge, so whats next in this story? is goku in this story? i hope he is. I can't wait for the next chapter!