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Amethyst Evangeline 2008-09-25 . chapter 5
I absolutely ADORE it! It's the best sesskag I've ever read, because the way you carefully draw everything out is amazing. I love how you made sure that Kagome and Sesshomaru don't fall for eachother right off the bat (which is a mistake most inexperienced authors make), but that you delved into their mind and tell every one of their conflicting thoughts and their hatred (lol) for one another, although I can see that Sesshomaru is slowing fighting a loosing battle with his "instincts".

When I realized that that fic hasn't been updated in a while, it really made me sad to see such a wonderful, talented piece of fanfiction unfinished. I was confused by the title of the last chapter which was "an ending", but it didn't sound like the ending to the story itself. So I wasn't sure if you intend to continue writing that fic. I implore you to do so; it is very rare to see a gifted writer such as yourself have the time to go back to their stories, as I know for a fact that we all have busy lives, but for the sake of your starved readers, please, please, PLEASE finished "In Too Deep"! ^^ You used 5 chapters to build up the suspense and tension and we (I'm speaking on behalf of your enthusiastic readers) are practically dying for another chapter.

I sincerely hope that you could go back to finish that marvelous story you wrote. It would be a shame to have such a spectacular fic (which in my opinion deserves much more reviews) end with the way it does.
Tipix 2008-05-28 . chapter 5
eehh! ANO? what do you mean I read all the chapters there are so far?? PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON! I just ADORE.. no LOVE.. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! hope you'll continue 'cause i'll be waiting
~Tipix
snusnu 2008-05-04 . chapter 5
that was wickeed cant waite for more
swordbunny4486 2007-08-06 . chapter 5
wow.
HarrySlytherinson 2007-05-12 . chapter 5
i hope sesshomaru goes mad the next day when he tries to visit kagome and see she is not at the campsite and has to wait a whole week hehehehehe!! he is so sexy that him being crazy is cute hahaha!! please update soon!
darkangel329 2007-04-03 . chapter 5
wow the drama! good story update soon please :)
S. T. Nickolian 2007-03-25 . chapter 5
LOL! Sesshomaru-no-baka! Idiot. What was he thinking? Putting her down like that then kissing her?! How does he expect her to react?! Update soon!
Mlmonty 2006-12-01 . chapter 5
Love for you to continue
koiichi no namae kaitou 2006-10-22 . chapter 5
awesome story!
i luv it!
plzz! continue da story~~

plz plz plz plzplz
pretty plz wif cherry on top
lmao

yea well
cya man~~
luv it!!
lil inu 2006-09-24 . chapter 3
Wow, this story is very interesting and awesome! It sucks you haven't written on it in so long.
alakeshadow 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Hey, great story so far. The only thing is in the first chapter after sesshomaru leaves and Inuyasha blows up at Kagome. She says to him "“Sorry! I forgot- Are you all right? He didn’t hurt you really bad? Did he? Come on, sit down and-“"
Its the last part-"...SIT down and-" Remember what 'sit' does to him? Anyway, you might want to change that, lol.
Pinkishrose 2006-06-13 . chapter 5
Hey, i just started reading this story today and i love it. It's one of the best i have read so far. I hope u would update soon. >.< ..
death and a red moon 2006-06-08 . chapter 5
oh kami-sama i love this fic the darkness of depression is truly justified in this fic. i love the way you caught the personalities and described them with such detail. the meetings
between sesshomaru and kagome are so dark and i love the part where sesshomaru finally figures out that he wants. the kissing scene was delicious and poor kagome her frayed nerves just didn't know how to react but the slap made up for that. your on my favorites and now i can't wait for the next chapter.
Lisa 2006-04-30 . chapter 5
That was a good story, when will the next chapters be ready. Please let me know.
Thanks
Lisa
Shadow of a Broken Angel 2006-03-10 . chapter 5
still waiting for a update as soon as possible
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