very good!

This fic is really great and I love how we see that beneath the skin of these two girls there's actually emotions. Akane is often too narrowminded to be an interesting character, but it succeeds here.

Also this story could be the beginning of a great fic. It would be nice to see how Akane and Makoto started developing their lives after they find someone that understands them, as that's something they seem to lack in their normal lives.

Aww...this was cute. I'm a big Makoto fan, but I've never read too much on the Ranma 1/2 series. Still, I liked this a lot! Good job!

A nice little story. That's all there is to it. Congratulations.

Sorry I'm reviewing so late. My computer keeps freezing on me. It's in the shop now. I'm on a library computer. I really liked this recent story of yours. It has no couples but the whole friendship thing is sweet. Mako-chan's making friends. She has a lot more in common with Akane then with the other inner senshi. They could even be sisters. I'm looking forward to another story (another vingette at least). When I get my pc back, look forward to an update, or rather a revision of Fly Me to the Moon that might as well be a different story. Ja, M.A.

This is so cute. I loved it you know this could lead into a really good fic. Anyway after reading this I had to get a tissue **sniff, snif, sniff** so adorble.

A pretty good fic, I enjoyed it

I liked your fic a lot. Very emotive and very original. This is one of those very rare times and author has made me like Akane for a while.

i luv it! its so kool!! are you going to write a sequel like makotos in the compotition and akane and her friends go and watch it!?!? plz write mroe