 Neeri 2004-10-22 . chapter 1 I've just read all three volumes of your 'Life of a Kludge', and They are very good. You did a really good job on Harper's past. One miniscule point- I thought that Declan and Siobhan were supposed to be twins, and in the very beginning you said that Harper's aunt had only one child (Siobhan). (Not particularly important, just thought I'd note it)
One thing that would be nice is a follow-up story (Rev, Trance, Vexpag, etc.), because while you did a very good job chaging Harper from the little kludge-child to who he is in the series, but I really think a follow-up would help complete that.
(Also, you are a very good author and I look forward to reading more of your stories in general.)
Neeri
Oh, oh! One more thing! I LOVED (grr... I hate the way there is no italics in this) the song in there. I really like celtic music, ballads especially. VERY nice touch.
All in all, awesome job. |
 LittleRedhead 2004-06-06 . chapter 1Cool chapter. More soon. It's been awhile since you updated. |
 Shakia 2004-05-25 . chapter 1Wow! Awsome story ((or stories :3))! :D I loved them so much! Think you might possibly, maybe continue them? *coughs* Anyhow, I loved it! Nice roll in characters and Harper's pastness! ^^ |
 Rommies voice 2004-05-11 . chapter 1 A fitting ending to a brillant story; does it really have to end though? |
 Janna T 2004-05-01 . chapter 1 Wow, I'm slow at reviewing this. I guess this what happens when when you don't come here for a month. Anyway, I really liked your story, you do a really good job at getting the character's emotions out on paper. I hope you write another Andromdea fic, cuz I'll be looking. Harper is just way too cute! |
 kingleby 2004-04-23 . chapter 1man i loved it! so great! ^_^ harper is my fav character out of them all and i love him to bits! you did him well! |
 Alexis Rose 2004-04-22 . chapter 1Good story!. |
 Anonymous 2004-04-21 . chapter 1 Wonderful, I can't wait for another chapter. Not only is the plot great, but you have a way with words that tells the tale well. Don't worry about the inflated ego, you truly seem to be 'a freak'n genius'. |
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