 SylverEyes 2008-04-17 . chapter 5O.O
Those last few paragraphs... were genious. Oh, wow... I cannot get over how much I love them. I'm feeling very touched and warm and fuzzy right now.
I can totally see that last scene in mind's eye, and I'm feeling the need to go draw it. |
 The Starry Puzzle 2007-06-30 . chapter 5Aww...this is such an adorable story and very original; with the idea, the names of the chapters, mostly everything. Good job! Keep up the good work. |
 monique 2006-12-29 . chapter 5 swet ah such cute ending nicely done, using simple words well can i have a snoop from its future com'on give me a sequel |
 little-girl-in-a-big-world 2006-12-07 . chapter 1love it, not at all OOC |
 Ballmaster 2006-12-03 . chapter 4NIce story:) Very well written:) |
 throwing-dynamite 2006-09-02 . chapter 5I think this story by far is one of the most original stories on here.
with the most awesome couple EVER!
you are brillant
thank you for this story |
 HarkTisLark 2006-06-25 . chapter 5Haha, I've played word association; you've presented a positively thrilling example of the game. ;D |
 HarkTisLark 2006-06-25 . chapter 4Very amusing. Loved the references to Raven's and Robin's paranioa. |
 HarkTisLark 2006-05-21 . chapter 3Cyborg and Beast Boy are a riot. Anyway, there's a lot of phrases in there thatlackspacinglikethis. I know it's not intentional, probably a formatting error. |
 HarkTisLark 2006-05-21 . chapter 2Brilliant humor.
Just some minor mistakes/typos:
"Surely you have seen Wonder Woman," The butler deadpanned.
"T" should not be capitalized.
"Why am I this again?" Raven muttered just loud enough for Robin to hear.
I don't quite understand her question. Maybe it's just me. XD |
 HarkTisLark 2006-05-21 . chapter 1You've got the characters down perfectly, and I love the wordplay littered throughout. |
 mixedfic 2006-03-27 . chapter 5 That was the best!! i luved it!! |
 totallyrae 2005-12-20 . chapter 2Cute, funny, and really cool. I like the word association parts, they were funny. |
 dark hope1 2005-12-01 . chapter 5this is a good one. i really enjoyed reading this. although there was some grammar mistakes, it was a well writen story. |
 Calamol 2005-11-29 . chapter 5brilliant even though Raven was quite out of character. So anyways...keep up the good work |