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SylverEyes 2008-04-17 . chapter 5
O.O
Those last few paragraphs... were genious. Oh, wow... I cannot get over how much I love them. I'm feeling very touched and warm and fuzzy right now.
I can totally see that last scene in mind's eye, and I'm feeling the need to go draw it.
The Starry Puzzle 2007-06-30 . chapter 5
Aww...this is such an adorable story and very original; with the idea, the names of the chapters, mostly everything. Good job! Keep up the good work.
monique 2006-12-29 . chapter 5
swet ah such cute ending nicely done, using simple words well can i have a snoop from its future com'on give me a sequel
little-girl-in-a-big-world 2006-12-07 . chapter 1
love it, not at all OOC
Ballmaster 2006-12-03 . chapter 4
NIce story:) Very well written:)
throwing-dynamite 2006-09-02 . chapter 5
I think this story by far is one of the most original stories on here.

with the most awesome couple EVER!

you are brillant

thank you for this story
HarkTisLark 2006-06-25 . chapter 5
Haha, I've played word association; you've presented a positively thrilling example of the game. ;D
HarkTisLark 2006-06-25 . chapter 4
Very amusing. Loved the references to Raven's and Robin's paranioa.
HarkTisLark 2006-05-21 . chapter 3
Cyborg and Beast Boy are a riot. Anyway, there's a lot of phrases in there thatlackspacinglikethis. I know it's not intentional, probably a formatting error.
HarkTisLark 2006-05-21 . chapter 2
Brilliant humor.

Just some minor mistakes/typos:
"Surely you have seen Wonder Woman," The butler deadpanned.
"T" should not be capitalized.

"Why am I this again?" Raven muttered just loud enough for Robin to hear.
I don't quite understand her question. Maybe it's just me. XD
HarkTisLark 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
You've got the characters down perfectly, and I love the wordplay littered throughout.
mixedfic 2006-03-27 . chapter 5
That was the best!! i luved it!!
totallyrae 2005-12-20 . chapter 2
Cute, funny, and really cool. I like the word association parts, they were funny.
dark hope1 2005-12-01 . chapter 5
this is a good one. i really enjoyed reading this. although there was some grammar mistakes, it was a well writen story.
Calamol 2005-11-29 . chapter 5
brilliant even though Raven was quite out of character. So anyways...keep up the good work
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