It was very detailed
I would like to say that JAMES WAS KEEPER
You have a natural flair c:

I am loving this chapter

great chap

nice chapter

good chap

very good no complaints haha

im gonna try and comment on every chap that way you have more reviews!
okay firstly im don't think Snape would call her a mudblood again he made that mistake once he certainly isn't gonna make it again.
secondly i don't think lily would punch him in the jaw like you said i'd say she would of just told him to go away or something but like i said before i doubt he would call her again especially as we notice in the HP series he gives out to the ex slytherin headmaster for calling hermione a mudblood in the 7th book.
other than that great chap!:P

She's not just a girl Padfoot, she's THE girl," James whispered
I LOVE THIS LINE!

interesting but what about severus snape he was her best friend til 5th year. em you know the way they all like each other secretly i don't really like that idea...ah but who am i to judge?

Please don't kill Katy! That would be heartbreaking! I love all your characters!

I'd like to say that you're an AMAZING writer but aren't they a little to young to get married? You're story is still great though.

Sorry, this review is like a thousand years after this story was posted, but I had to say something: This story is REALLY GOOD! It has so many surprises and twists in it! I cried in this chapter but I know things will get better! Great story!

Nice :)

what a horrible and stupid story.

James was a chaser, but anyway good story.