Sayonara Sarutobi... ç_ç

Nice poem, by the way!

I liked it! _ Love the ending!

Wow, I actually understood what was going one. It takes a good poem for me to actually understand. A nice kind of tibute to the Thrid Hokage. And a good ending sentence. Sometimes people forget that heroes do die.

I do not usually review poems, but since this one is neatly written I thought I'll give it a try. It's a nice one, I don't see many writers out there tackling The Third related subjects, especially his death. Maybe because it's a poem it makes the telling easier. I agree with you, he is a hero. Albeit, a less popular one. Good job.

That's a good poem. I hate trying to rhyme. It's somewhat futile for me. Unless I have a certain subject to rhyme about. My friend won't watch 80 yet. I don't understand. She already knows what's going to happen yet she doesn't want spoilers...
Er, rambling again...'taku.

I dont read many poems around here but I really thought that was good. Keep up the good work

A sad poem. A well writen sad poem about Sandamei's death and how Konoha felt about it. Very nice. Keep writing the good ones.