Love it! GYAH!

Oh! I reviewed this under Kikoken! No wonder. *shakes head*

Yes, I'm under a new penname. I'm planning a comeback in the YuGiOh section though. :)

"My sista', Serenity Wheeler has gone missin'! She, not it, has been gone for-" He paused, the distress on his face disappearing, being replaced with confusion. "Mai..." He turned his head away from the misty steam coming from the officer's coffee, and addressed the violet eyed woman standing next to him.

She surveyed him with concern and sympathy.

"How long has she been missing?"
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I swear to God, that is so like Joey. xD

Very good story so far.

Seriously? wtf. No words can describe my thoughts and feelings at having to read this.

An ending like this, especially to such an interesting story despite the other show characters, is just pathetic and lazy. Also amateur. At least give a reason as to not finishing: no more ideas, lost interest, whatever but anything would be better than that.

Wonderful story- appaling conclusion.
It really needed something a bit better to wrap it up with.

what kind of pathetic anding is that! (mocks)rocks fall. everyone dies. thats not an ending!

Wha...? Thats the end of the story? But, I wanted to know what happened.. :'( (*insert angry/sad insults here*)

...a-are you flippin kidding me!? What kind of ending is that!?

Don't listen to all those people who hate your ending! Most of them haven't read the most complex books in life...Your final chapter...it's so metaphoric, that I like it, but it sucks to just read two sentences but...still, I suggest you do an alternate ending.:> Yeah...give all those angry reviewers something to read again.

no offence, what was that?
only 6 words.
sorry that was your most rubbished chapter
you could done better

you mother fucker! I should fucking shoot you! you dare call yourself a writer. get of this site it's for people with actual talent

I love this story make another story like this :D

Wow...what the heck? Rocks fall. Everyone dies...WTF is that? I seriously don't understand what that means... I understand your a busy person and you have other more important things to do but hello? C'mon the whole story was awesome ( hey I even put it onto my favorite story list) but those last two lines diminish the whole story. Maybe I have no right so say any of this since I only wrote one story but at least I tried to write an okay ending. So please if you can and if you hear our pleas, please continue the story. I seriously respect you as an author and I don't want to see that respect go away.

you suck what kind of ending was that on the last chapter i;m pissed the last chapter wasn't there when i first re3ad this story and i just now find it again to find thats how it ends how suckish you need to work on that

WHAT? Just an explanation why you cannot finish the story would have sufficed. I don't know what to say...How disappointing. It was a great story...