Sweet friend story. Nice.

Very nice. Good emotion adn nice tie in between the movie and the show. The close friendship between Peter and Egon was nice too. I always like reading that in fan fics. Great Job! I hope you write another soon!

Cute--a nice crossover from the movie to the cartoon. You don't get many Dana stories (if any!)and the fact that she was not in the cartoon leaves a lot of room for fanfic writers to play w/her character. Good job.

Wonderful little ficlet. Personally I'm always glad when Dana is not involved with Peter, especially when it's RGB Peter, lol. I just could never get over her treating him like dirt when she first meets him so I'm glad he finds closure in this ficlet :). Also, if they split up twice than she's definitely not "the one" for him and "the one" is still out there :). Also to me it seemed like Movie Peter didn't really seem like he needed the guys and the guys needed him. It's different with RGB Peter, which is another reason this little ficlet is so good. Anyway, great little ficlet. As an RGB Peter fan I absolutely loved it :).