Great job! Perfectly in character for a young Egon. ^_^

THat's a very cute story. I can definatly imagine that happening. YOu kept Egon in character, which is good, and I thouroghly enjoyed this story.

Cute. I liked this. Egon as a little kid. Sounds very much like how he would've been at that age.

Heehee. A little Egon. How cute! You caught his scientificness, and his little kid-ness. Good job.

i loved it! that was just the cutest thing i've ever read!

So... that's when Santa brought him Quark, huh? ;)

Lovely little story, dear. You've perfectly captured time, place, and character. Now, weren't we going to get more RGB Boys Christmas stories? ::poke poke::

Aw!

That was absolutely adorable. It is not always easy to shrink the characters down into young children--especially someone so "adultish" as Egon--but you did an excellent job of portraying him with a mixture of scientific intelligence and childhood innocense. I would love to see someone illustrate this--I had a really adorable picture in my mind of an 8 year old Egon. Please don't leave us in suspense like this--I was so disappointed when I saw that there was only one chapter to this thing! CONTINUE! PLEASE!

This story was too adorable for words, Egon misses his kitten!