Kool, i really like it, keep it up!

Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.

Awesome story so far. I read it all the way through and couldn't get enough of it! I like the original characters, and Riddick and Kyra are cute in this story.

The only thing I noticed that you could work on was you switched between referring to her as Kyra and Jack in the story. Like how all of these writers like to keep their stories in one tense, you should stick to one name too, I think. If Riddick calls her Jack, that's ok and different then from the author referring to her as Jack once and Kyra all the other times, you know?

But seriously, the story is really good and I can't wait for more. ^^ Good job.

wow, just wow O_O this is a really good one involving you're story of CoR, I like it! really its not to cliche and its quite addicting to read! please update soon

cool. so is it logan or tooms...can't wait to find out. update soon.

update soon PALEASE!

Great story so far... can't wait for the next chapter

these are really long chapters, its not bad or anything, but they are very long. i like this, but it is moving at the pace of a snail. this chapter was sort of boring and in my opinion should of had more of the big plot points in it, to get the story moving along. good job tho, keep up the good work.

FINALLY AN UPDATE! Update again soon!

Aww, yay! You've returned! I was thinking you were a goner. Yay, new chapter. Good restart. Update quick, got a lot of catching up to do.

SWEET! Update! Seriously, for the love of God, update!

yay i love this story

Hello Ana. UPDATE!

really good please update

like the story and everything, but the character Riddick doesn't seem like...well, Riddick