wow...very reminescent of when my best friend came out to me..oh memories.

~alex~

this was a relly funny drabble...

I loved it...

I loved it...

So cool...

Specially the skip notes and Vegeta listening to her...

he is such a moron

I really like these little stories. They are complete in their own way, and don't take a great deal of stewing over to understand. (It's so easy to skip words or drift off when you are reading something very long.) You hav certainly achieved a sort of "economy of fanfiction", something I think all the writers here (should) strive for. You said what you wanted to say without saying too much, and you remained true to the personalities of the characters in the anime. I also liked reading the song lyrics and the notes about your writing process. I think people should be more willing to share so-called "half-baked" ideas.

ha..i actually sang that song (in english) in chorus back in middle school..

i do love these drabbles...

~alex~

future tense is always a hard tense to write in..but i gotta say you definetly are getting the hang of it!

~alex~

i love this whole concpet of the story. The little tidbits of stories are so good that you're totally satisfied with how it's going and you don't care about length.

i really, really loved this one too.


~alex~

loved it!

~alex~

i really, really liked this drabble. you made a lot of good points in the author's note too. I notice that people always leave out Bulma being goku's best friend. i've even done it myself, but not in my story Oh, zat rings a bell. i try my hardest to incoporate real facts and ideas in my 'three year' fics, even though i've never written a story that i could say " oh yeah that was defenitnetly what went down." i don't think anyone really does. or if they try they never happen to be as accurate as possible.

but that's just what i think...

~alex~

yeah, i always took that line from yamcha into account for my stories, ( just not my story ' Oh Zat Rings a Bell') he sounded very bitter. which reminds me of something, at that time bulma said that she just lost track of vegeta. that just sounds stupid to me. ...just wanted to bring taht up. great drabble.

`alex~

i love this little collection fo stories. i'm so glad you updated!!

~alex~

Omigod! Ahahaha, I actually thought they were doing something else! Convincing! ^__^ Good job!

oh my god this reminds me when these two gets on my bus were atlkign about how one went to the other's house and they were trying to put together the hammer and the screwdriver. it was funny but perverted.

~alex~

You hit the nail right on the head... Aw Poor Vegeta at least he turn good again after that.