Oh so sweet Harry cooking for Ginny. I hope your update soon

Nice description of their spending time together after Pomfrey leaves--very poetic, and not too explicit.
And I have to compliment you on your writing skills--great use of punctuation and phrasing--a welcome relief from the travesty that some authors perpetrate.
Oh, and Pavarti->Parvati (which I'm sure you already know).

Hmm, good fight scene--it's great to see Ginny step up to defend her chosen mate. What curse was Ginny hit with that made her gasp in pain? Nothing is ever said about it, so it couldn't have been too deadly. Also, what was Madam Pomfrey doing that she was so easily available to get to the Burrow?
Anyway, still engrossing, and don't take my questions as criticisms, they're just the insane ramblings of a fevered mind--or you can think that I can't find any problems to criticize, so I just pick on other things... :)

Hm. Wouldn't Ginny notice too soon about the swapped dress robes? And what did Harry notice that made him pull out his wand? Not that I'm too stressed about the answer, I'm just enjoying the story too much to worry.
Oh, comment about previous chapter--Harry had the dream where Voldemort taunted him with Ginny's body. It's nice that, so far, Harry hasn't decided to play "NobleSelfSacrificeMan" and break up with Ginny to "keep her safe". That just always bugs me.
Of course, I may have to eat my words later...

Two comments on this chapter:
1) There's no mention of Ginny having said that she's going out with Dean, which happened at the end of book 5. So, either Harry's forgotten that, or they've already discussed it in their letters, but either way, it probably should have been mentioned.
2) Why in the world would Hermione use Divination as an excuse? She dropped that awhile ago.

Loved the hug, and especially the handholding under the table!
Loved that Ron gave Harry a hug too, and neither felt the need to fuss over it--they're comfortable in their friendship, and that's good.
I do feel the need to point out that it's Little Whinging, not Little Whining, although it's a rather humorous typo, and makes me chuckle.

Wow!! Great start--I absolutely loved the characterization of Ginny as shown in her letter! I can just imagine her saying all those things.
I'm curious as to the lack of reaction with using the word Love to end both Ginny's and Harry's letters--usually Harry is portrayed as being a little more obtuse than that. But, I'm certainly not complaining.
Off to read chapter 2.

nice chapter :) i hope you update soon!

That was good chapter!

Nice chapter, but I saw one inconsistency. Early in the chapter, you have Harry tell Ginny he is on bedrest for two weeks, yet he is able to go outside, throw the quaffle with Ron and back a cake? That isn't bedrest. Perhaps a quick edit of Madam Pomphrey's directions?

i like your story! i hope you continue it soon!

interesting chapter,byes

I love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!

loved it!

is harry a horcrux in your story? if he is i'm guessing the black as night smoke was maybe voldy's soul?...not likely but its a guess :P

What curse was thrown at harry?