Ah! No chapter two! No! #falls to knees# You're very cruel, you know that? And is it just me, or is it sounding like Hermione is this 'unstable' soldier? Hmm...

Cool story, never thought of a Magic Army besides the DA. Very good idea, I like it:)
Update soon, I can't wait!

wow, curious to see how this is going to be draco/hermione?! good work, you've got me interested! Update your stories...please :)keep it up

That was really good but now i have to go pack...for camping...just nvm...long story...BUT IT WAS REALLY GOOD UPDATE!

Thx
_*~Dill*~_

Well, I really truly hope that you countinue this story. I'd love to read more!

That was really really great. It all sounded very official and those bits sort of went in one eye and out the other but I still enjoyed it. Poor Remus. Doesn't sound like he's having the most fun of times. And Harry died? Oh dear.
Gotta go shower (mums going beserk but I will review properly nxt chappie!)
Luv cat

well, hurry up and continue it then, you haven't updated this *or* Shamanism for a long time, dammit. There was no Hermione or Draco in this chapter. meh.

valentine's day fic contest huh? i was very surprised to find that this story is going to be written for v-day. is this going to have v-day in it?
you've got a great start, and you've definitely planted some seeds of suspicion in my mind about this mysterious sergeant. i can't wait until you have more for this uploaded.

oh, wow.
this is so well written! i really like it so far! please update soon!

Hm, very interesting. While I'm sad to here there won't be any updates for a good long while I have to say that this chapter has caught my attention and I'll be looking forward to reading more of it this summer.

who the heck is the woman? hurry up and update so i can find out! :)

Nice story so far . . . but why do I get the feeling that this Henrietta is someone we know? Hermione perhaps?
Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D

Sergeant Henrietta Lainey is that hermione, i clicked on ginny thou. but the thing that made me thing it was hermione was hoe remus knew her from before. ohh well done this is wonderfuly written. keep up the great work and please update soon. luv nats

hey awesome stoey update soon

nice way to go with the challenge and not get caught up in a cliche hogwarts deelio. remus is very in character.
your songwriting is magnificent. hee.