this story is so sad! but really good at the same time!

ah...gut wrenching

so very sweet, I loved it.

Good story. I don't like this one as well as I do That Fateful Tuesday, but it's sweet. (I'm TATE though, so maybe I'd feel sadder if I changed my shipper affiliation. lol) good job.

Again, I say wow! But I can't say I liked this one as much as your others (esp. Void). Not sure the emotions are quite right. Otherwise, good job!