This is honestly the first Kuja story that has me hooked, and I'm not usually fond of Kuja stories. The only thing that I see that you may want to work on is the continuity with two major events that happened in the story. The first being that Fratley had a vision of a white cloaked man destroying one of the major kingdoms, and the second being that Fratley was killed and his soul and body was captured. Try putting that into play, or it's going to seem that you just killed off a major character for no real reason. This will cause a hole in the plot. Other than that, you are doing very well and I hope that you update soon.

P.S.
Check out my story Final Fantasy IX: the Forever Prophecy. Seeing that you like big stories, you might like what I wrote.

I love it! You write Kuja so well; this story is as good as the game. Please continue soon; it's interesting!

Wow...no really, WOW! This is excellent. Recieving a review from you now has more honor in it since I've read this. Let me say I'm not a huge fan of Final Fantasy, but your skills as an author are very well developed. I'd like to see your work outside of a fanfic, perhaps we might be able to edit each other's work. This is excellent, definitely one for the favourites list!
Namaste'
Eliza

Oh, Kuja's past. Poor Kuja *huggles Kuja plushie* Update soonie plz ^_^

Great fan fic a bit confusing at times plz continue.

Yay a good Kuja fanfic. I know I should have noticed it sooner but IX isn't as active as VII. Please you really must continue with the story. I have a thing for any "evil" person. I still never like to look at a person as evil, only misunderstood. I really wish that the chapters were longer, but I suppose begger can't be choosers. Oh yeah just in case you missed it PLEASE CONTINUE!

YAY, updates updates updates *sings the update song*. This story is awsome. Kuja=cool-ness! ^_^ Update again soon plz!

Great story. Wonder what they need the Eye of the Invincible for? Hm. Anywho, this is a really great story, update soon, please!

Oh! A soul-stealer-thingy? Thats creepy. 0_o Anywho, how d'ya update so fast? I'll never be able to get how people do that...*shakes head*
Well, hope ya update again soon!
~DL8

Hey! great ficcy you got going here! I don't see why more people haven't reviewed! Maybe if you took off the Login-thingy? Ah well...anywho, hope you update soon!
~dl8

i never liked Garnet... well anyways excellant chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next in here! ^^

wow.. that's got a good plot to it! add, add, add please!! ^^

I like your story, not enough people FFIX stories, to have good reviewing. I know you feel like, I wrote 8 chps of my story and got 3 reviews so far. Hopefully not enough people have read my story, i hope it doesn't suck. it is kinda of sad. But, good story on your part.

Some of the best fics ever written mostly go unnoticed" something someone once told me, i forgot the name of the person who said it. But anyways excellant chapter again ^^ please update as soon as u can

this is really really good!! please continue *gets down on knees and begs for a update* i want to know what will happen to Kuja