Happy and fluffy again. :]

Sigh, I love happy endings.

Nice story!

You are a good writer!

more more more!

i didn't read chap 5 yet im guessing it bens voice. Am i right? i'll just have to read on...

Man i love this story!

okay. this was really good! but you cant just stop like this. okay lemme paste your A/N:

A/N: So...I was thinking of this being the last chapter...the angsty stuff is kinda over...and they're happy and fluffy again...or do you guys want more? If you do, give me ideas!

Firstly, the angsty stuff is NOT over. They haven't gotten over the loss of the baby - hell, they haven't had time to GRIEVE! And Ben should be charged with MURDER too. Murder of their child! Not just attempted murder of Tristan!

Happy and fluffy? I still see lots of unresolved feelings...though they're both safe.

Anyhow you have so many issues that could be dealt with - real life issues, not just fluffy fic stuff. The real guts and gore of life that make people laugh or cry. Why not give it a shot?

Maybe have them talk things out, cry together, they have money - maybe name a wing at a hospital in their child's honor - or open a counselling center for parents who've lost children before and after birth - with free counselling to people in need? Sorry, I was just so sad at points in this story...and there are so many possibilities of what you could write...

And who knows, maybe an epilogue of them in the future, happy, back to their old life, maybe end with them sitting on a porch swing, Rory's head in Tristan's lap as they watch their kids run and play in the yard with a nice golden retriever...them never forgetting their unborn child but having found serenity and lasting love in each other and their children. God I'm a sentimental freak!

My mind ran away once the ideas started rolling LOL

In any case, thanks for sharing your stories - I really have enjoyed them! Good luck if you decide to continue this...and even if not. I'll be keeping an eye on you...serve up more of your wonderful writing fare!

KUDOS.

Shay

Okay i love love love love love your story..but since you havent updated in a while i dont think you will now, but im going to give you my idea anyway. I think you should do a epilogue. It should start at their wedding..second that is. And when Tristan and Rory go to say "I DO" they should go thru the memories of their lives after that night. Thier kids births', happy memories of the two of them together. It would mean a lot to me if you did this. Especially because its 3:00 am and i have to get up at 6:00am for school. But i stayed up to read your story..so please do this for me!

you need to definetely clear up the whole died in a car fire thing... and maybe give them some semblence of better times in the future...

This is great...I'm thinking more...with them all happy and fluffy. lol

great story.. maybe this is a good end..:)

i really like this...please add a really fluff chapter though!

u must continue do not end it here! update ASAP!

loved this chapter Arwen, i will keep on reviewing for you

HE'S ALIVE! HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE!HE'S ALIVE! *does happy dance* I knew you wouldn't kill him off. I liked that little flashback a little on the naughty side but just enough to get us into the story again. Poor Tristan Rory will have to nurse him back to health. Hehehe. That'll be good. Loved that he called he Mary. Continue soon.

**Jazz**

Hey!

This was a really good chapter, though not that angsty except maybe for the first part where you explained what happened in the last chapter. I kind of liked this ending because it's sweet, but it's still a little unresolved, know what I mean? It would be the perfect ending to this kind of story.

Bye, smile :-)

Hurry with an update! I hope you continue you this with them getting there life back and having kids!