 mel92 2007-11-16 . chapter 4hey please continue the story its got potential (i think thats how u spell it) Please update soon ok! |
 Rika24 2007-07-12 . chapter 4Very interesting! i never seen a story like this for digimon before. hikari as blacktailmon, love the idea. please continue ^_^ |
 PrincessOfHeartsNYP 2007-07-04 . chapter 4update^^ |
 Taeniaea 2007-04-17 . chapter 4I Love The Chapter:4 Plz Plz Update It Soon!! |
 Nick Johnson 2006-11-08 . chapter 1 I have some things I like to ask you. 1. What is this fanfic's plot? 2. When does it take place? 3. What location(s) are being used in the fanfic? 4. How old is everyone in this fic? 5. What was going on when this fic begun? 6. Where did it begin at? Be specific. 7. Were Gennai and Centrumon the only ones at that location? 8. What were they doing there? Why? 9. What were they talking about? Why? 10. And what did they mean when they said, "He's Here"? Be sure to write back with some answers. If you want, you can choose which questions you feel like answering at this time. Those remaining can be answered either later or within the fanfic. |
 the lost-kitten 2006-11-05 . chapter 3good chapter, nice effect to the end of that. Need more
update soon
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 Taeniaea 2006-11-04 . chapter 3I Love The Chapter:3 Plz Plz Update It Soon!! |
 Taeniaea 2006-11-01 . chapter 2I Love The Chapter:2 Plz Plz Update It Soon!! |
 the lost-kitten 2006-10-16 . chapter 2intersting like it so far
update soon
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 Hikari-4-Takeru 2004-07-08 . chapter 1Review soon! : ) |
 James6 2004-05-21 . chapter 1Three YEARS? Dude...
Sorry to be a critic, but I feel I must point out:
This chapter provided a good intro, but was far too short. If you want to engage interest, put some drama (A mysterious stranger performing some dark deed is a popular cliche')into the mix. It is vital to use unique ideas to grab, to show your story has things to offer.
I hope you continue, though. I'm sure you have some kind of magic up your digital sleeve! |
 Alforce Zero 2004-05-21 . chapter 1A very intrigueing opening chapter. It really sets the mood to begin a story. I hope you update soon, I really would like to know about these three digimons "that have long since gone" and about this Temple of Trinity. You didn't reveal anything much about this yet... maybe in later chapters we'll get to see that? Well, I'll be waiting =) |
 Salamon2 2004-05-04 . chapter 1Sounds like a job for them indeed...
These artifacts sound as though they might make Digimon Digivolve or something like that... or maybe they're the source of corruption... who knows... well you do, but who else does? |
 Yami Silverdramon 2004-04-29 . chapter 1wow cool |
 Dora-the-elda 2004-04-23 . chapter 1Hey good opening! I like how this plot sounds... i hope it's a takari! Oh, also please try to use capitals at the beginning of sentences... it just looks better... |