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trecebo 2004-06-29 . chapter 3
Hey! I mean Hey! This has alot of potential. Vincent has to own up to lying. BeachHead can play a part of the torture. (Cuz as much as he "doesn't like the females", he hates liars more). And throw in Shipwreck for good measure. He he he.
T. 2004-05-02 . chapter 3
Well, got to say i like the good girl ending better. Hope you continue it.
Alison 2004-04-23 . chapter 3
Come on. Don't tell me this is the end. You've got to write more. I want to know what Duke does to Falcon after he finds out the truth and how he tries to make it up to Scarlett because he was being such a **.
Oh by the way, I thought both endings were interesting but I did like the good girl ending better.
Kat 2004-04-23 . chapter 3
Got to go with the good girl option although the bad girl option was fun. Are you going to continue them? It could be interesting.
Scarlett Phoenix 2004-04-23 . chapter 3
Hey there! Chapter one made my night last night and I got to read the rest of it this morning. :)
Very amusing. Could you imagine if that had happened in the show? The situation is very possible.
Now which ending to choose? Well, I'm going out on a limb and picking chapter 2 since this is as you said just for fun.
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