great chapter

i have seen this story so many times but never read it. it was amazing though and i am happy i finally took the time to read it. great job.

This is the best Gilmore Girls story I've ever read. You've captured the essence of the characters. You should work for Amy Sherman-Palladino- no joke

aw I loved this story! it was so sweet! the writing style is different than im used to but i really liked it! and youve got the characters down, so now its all downhill from here. Lol! I really like the way you wrote it and the way I could picture everything happening. so Props dude! haha love that... lol!

Ok, first off, this is a really good fic! I do think it's a little confusing, because you said it's the summer after Rory's sophomore year. Does this mean they were never together in Season 5? Or did you mean to sa after Rory's freshman year? Other than that, I really like it!

**"True, it was more of a hi-honey-I'm-home kiss than a front-hook-or-back-hook?"**

Thats just an awsome line.

Aww, cute!! I like!

I have no idea how I missed the last few chapters of this, so I'm chiming in incredibly late.

It's lovely. All of it. The story itself, the narration, the dialogue. It's just lovely. You have beautifully rhythmic prose: it just wants to be read. So, again, it's lovely.

kay, more fav parts:

Oh, or I can guess. Bookends. A pony. Early Monet lithograph. Am I warm?"

"Too bad. We'd look cute in wimples."

"Well, there was that whole Dan Rydell thing, but it turns out he's fictional."

"It's not nice to scare Mommy."

I'm gonna read more now! Sorry if the reviewing is annoying... :)

Aw... *cough cough...imagined the lemonade...* Here's a couple of my fav lines:

She stretched one bare arm across the counter and prodded the light blue veins on the underside of her elbow. "Looks good to me."

"I would kiss you even if you tasted like barnacle-solvent-lemonade."

As far as come-ons went, it wasn't her best.

Good story! No, scratch that, great story! Or better... ;)

i completely love that this is all a hypothetilcal thing. such a freekin' great story.

so svet (lol, or sweet, whatever floats your boat, man)

i love this! keep it up !

Hey, I thought I'd pop in to tell you that I just finished reading this for the second time!

You have the characters and dialogue down pat, it really is marvelous.

Thanks! ~Miss Corker

aww. that was really cute :)