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| Galadeidre 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThat story was so sad. But it was very very good. I really liked that one. I was so close to crying. It was really good that you put it in two people's thoughts, switching from the little girl to the mutant. It was very well written and i really appreciated it. Thanks! ~Galadeidre~ |
| Lamby 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written and very emotive, you should be very proud of this stunning peice of work. Well done. Lamby |
| Light of Life22 2004-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting, I liked it, the end was good, I likes the bit about going to heaven and finding the father. |
| Blix Howlett 2004-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interesting style you've used in this story. It's sad. *sniffles* Well, it makes me feel happy and sad at the same time. Nice work. |