I Hope Inuyasha Dies in this story, ^_^; eheheh sorry but if he is going to attack Kagome or anybody else he should die he should fight Naraku instead but I get the Feeling Naraku was behind this -_-; well I hope you update soon! ^.^

Love it love it love it love it love it love it LOVE IT! hehe I really really do! Pwlease continue it!
Kira

I love it! I can't wait to see what Kagome and the Reikai Tantei does to InuYasha!

Love it update again soon. ^.^

I love it please up date asap!

tsk tsk... inuyasha needs to learn some manners...
please update soon.

Keep it up!

I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!

please write more

please update
very good story

You have to got update! :)

Wow. It's really good, me likey, So is Inuyasha going to die? Hehehe um...just asking.
-The Demon Goddess of Death-

Love the story so far. Why'd Inuyasha get so angry?

I would love the help. it would mean lots too me, you will have to get them of the internet i am afraid, when i am done i delete the chapter, its stupid i know, on my word prossessor tho, the sends some of the chapter's but not them all, i would really like help, just a question, what storys ?! i had to use this the email would not send sorry,

The following review has been submitted to: My Life Chapter: 1

From: Slightly Wicked ( )

Hello, i'm just reviewing to offer my services as a Beta Reader for a select few
of your stories. I believe you have decent plotlines and a friend of mine really
likes them, she has asked me to help you edit your stories, not for spelling,
but for grammer and context- they need to be fleshed out so the sentences aren't
so disjointed.

If you want to take me up on this offer please contact me through my email- it
would help if you sent a complete grouping of chapters in one file- just copy
and paste them into one Master Copy. I should be able to get them back to you
completely edited and ready for inspection and approval within three to four
days.

Slightly Wicked/ Darkest Melody

like it.