What a fun read! Watching this movie is one of my guilty pleasures. Good job! Can't wait to read more!

Poor Rina.Just wants a wee bit of sleep.But such a good freind.

Love it! :) And I envy yous so much on seeing the movie again! Oh the things I would do to own that movie...*sigh* alas, it is not to be. I am on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter. And I must agree...who wouldn't want to get to know Don Juan? *sigh* Or Johnny Depp for that matter? :)

"Sane until otherwise proven."

Perfectly said.

"Jack! Do you see what I mean? Utterly ludicrous!"

Ha,he's such a pansy.

Always judging never taking a deep breath to watch the world, they go in with an eye-full of what the world should look like and take it from there.

Hate people like that.

Great work.Glad to see you're updating this again.

"You look as if you were awaiting your lover."

Ha,funny I was thinking the same thing.

"Although this isn't exactly professional..."

Who cares!

"as if reaching for his sword, when he realized that he had none he shrugged and crossed his arms nonchalantly,"

Yes,just go with the flow and impervise.

This is going at a great pace =) And good sizing for the chapters..not to little and not to big :)

“You!

Ooh, goodie! Someone else is writing a Don Juan DeMarco story! I'll get back to reading it some other time, as I do not have the time right now. But I think you write really well, and I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this story soon!

Hahahahaha
Occupation:Worlds greatest lover
LMAO! so funny!
I do believe this is the first Don Juan DeMarco fics ive ever read! there should be more! :D
I too like your idea of writing fics on lots of diff. characters :D
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Toleda

Name: Don Juan DeMarco. Occupation: World’s Greatest Lover.
Ha,perfectly put.And good question about his eye color,what exactly are they?

I like the start.I'm glad to see more and more people are starting to make Don Juan DeMarco stories.He's such a fun character to read.And I like you plot so far.I also love your idea of writing something for each of your favorite charcters.I was thinking of doing that,but my creativity only comes along once in a blue moon,so it would take a while.