This is great!! I was so happy to find an Arcanum story! Can't wait for you to continue!!

so...you ever going to update?

ST

Rather good, keep it up. Even if you passed some things like the Elf after the altar and the altar.

it's taken me ages to find a good arcanum fic--thank you! all right, i have one minor criticism--you skip over things a little to fast. your descriptions are sketchy at best--i have no idea what anyone, or anything, looks like. you mention the sword, but you don't describe it, and the only thing i know about your character is that she's half-elven and has shoulder-length hair. i'll stop blabbering now, and let you get back to writing. (hint hint)

ST

Continue no matter what anyone says you must finis story.

A good story. I'd like to see where this goes.
~*Star Dragonmaiden*~