terrific writing style great story idea PLEASE write more.

Wow... W.O.W.! I can not wait for Chapter 5... this is amazing! I love the plot, and the characters... and I can not wait to see how it has more to do with the little mermaid. Hurry up, and update! I can't wait!

Yay the review thing works now!!:D
Here's my two questions:

#1)Is Calypso the Sea Witch? Cos shes not really a mermaid and neither is the sea witch as you said.

#2)How can Calypso breath underwater?? Or is she half mermaid??

um lovely chapter. as far as publishing, i havent even finsihed the story yet. (bangs self on head angrily) dont worry, im really trying to finish it.

I really can't believe its taken me this long to read this! *Bangs head against wall*. Ugh, I'm stupid.

This is amazing! I love it. It's so good. *Dances* Ok, it really is. I'm serious. It makes me gleeful and yearn for more, and if that happens, that means its good, and I like it. Not many stories do that to me. So feel proud.

I have always loved the Little Mermaid. When I was young, Ariel was my idol. I didn't like Ursula much though, maybe cause she was just gross. But then I found out that the Disney movie the Little Mermaid had been modified from the original story. So I got kinda mad. But I still loved it.

Anyways, I love myths and legends about the sea. It fascinates me.

This has been beautifully written so far. The descriptions and everything are so...perfect. I also love how you went from the third person to first person. Immediately I was drawn to what Calypso's opinion was on all this, and whether or not she truly realized what happened.

Prophecy. I like how you weave that in too. It always makes things more interesting, in every perspective. Oh wow. This story really is really good. I really like it. But I think you know that already. Ok, I'll stop talking now, bye! Update soon!

Btw, in your summary for this, you say:
You know me as the Sea Witch, evil of the little mermaid.

Just reminding you to fix it. Yeah.

I added you to my fav authors list in order to remind me to read your stories other then "A Blackened Rose", namely, this one. But I was terribly sad when I found out you might not be continuing it (?) and was intrigued to read this, so here I am!

I just wanted to say: beautifully written prologue. I love the last 3 lines. Ok, moving on now!

Oh... that's so sad! She just... left? I like how they were happy together, but she still had her place in the sea.

And the shift to first-person was just brilliant. I love her life...

gasps! (small note before i continue reviewing: i'm hyper right now, so I'm gonna use a lot of exclamation points)
okay, i have a list of things I need to say *takes deep breath
1: yay! you're continuing this story!
2:OMG "poppet"! POTC! even if it has nothing to do w/ the fic, omg, "poppet"! I love that word!
3: OMG, the whole thing w/ her tail not being right, omg, that was so sad!
4: this really reminds me of that myth, where some guy came upon some girls who were bathing, and then he stole one of the robes so the one of them couldn't go back to heaven, it's an old myth... this story reminds me of it! With the whole "I have to go back to the sea"!Adriana and sad!Andrew!
5: okay, high king is ** me off. stupid perv, w/ way too many wives, and wtf is up w/ treating your first wife like a nurse?! Stupid perv *mutters*
6: OMG! I love this! I can't wait for an update and i'm so glad your continuing this!
(Like I said, there are a lot of exclamation points. What can I say, I'm hyper! *apologetic smile)

ooh boy, betrayal. those are always fun to write about. just sucks when its you who is betrayed...hehe. please keep writing.

OH, whats gonna happen next?! This mysterious child intrigues me. How Adriana gonna break Andrew's heart? Well done and please keep going and update soon ^_^

pretty interesting i cant wait to find out what happens next! please update soon! ^__^

oohh... I like this chapter! Can't wait for more! And what about this drastic heartbreaking i hear...?
hugs and kisses
Mel

hey there!
aw, it was very cute :) adriana and andrew are so CUTE! lol! it was very well-written, if a bit formal and detached, but you've created fantastic imagery... you've written it so i can almost see everything that's happening. although, a little more talk/conversation couldn't hurt :)
hm, and there's also quite a bit of mystery involved! very secretive. but i LOVE a good mystery :) i mean, i can sort of guess at it, but i'll never be 100% certain :) i'm looking forward to reading more. hopefully the next chapters will develop the storyline a little more. i also want to know more about this seventh child! this little girl with her mother's eyes... interesting...
keep it up!
~ Nadia :P
ps - you've got a really funky name! i love it :P

Your prologue sounds awesome. I love the way it's written -- it's very mysterious and flows nicely. Good job!

Okay, you said that the fluffiness won't last long, so I'll just enjoy it while it's still present :-) And cool anticipation-waity-thingy-sitting-on-edge-of-chair-thing with "This child would be great". Dunno if that really long hyphenated word made sense, but it's basically just really cool foreshadowing. I'm guessing that the child is the sea witch. Well, dunno, just guessing. Update soon!