Dude no one that was just kidnapped would want to got to McDonalds! They would wantto got to the police station and fil a report! Sheesh!

This was a good story, but you should have the ending longer...and...MAKE MORE HIGHSCHOOL FICS!

Wow that was a good story,that was kinda werid when Narkau was saying that he was going out with kagome and he was accully going out with kagome...thats kinda confusing@.@

The biginings a start.

aw cute

You say they were friends since kinder garnden but that they hate eachother?

great story i was reading it instead of cleaning my room ill probably diefrom my mom soon but it was worth it(feel special)

u should do this next time, butifRin falls in luvwith fluffy i might freak and have a breakdown becuase ill watch the show and see both of them ill have perverted thoughts thought u might want 2 know

It was a good story with a unique twist of Naraku in it. Evil half demons always make good villans.

Not exactly what I thought the ending would be like... first of all, you made that chapter too short like, making Naraku tell Inuyasha where Kagome was... but, all in all, it was a great story. LOL... I loved the ending. Inuyasha picked up kagome bridal style but as he was walking to McDonalds with Kagome, they were arguing all the way there. It was a GREAT story.

Another great chapter. Can things get any worse?... I'll just go read the next chapter...

Another great chapter. Can things get any worse?... I'll just go read the next chapter...

PLEASE forgive me for not reading your story lately. I got in trouble with my parents and I wasn't able to get on. Anyway, I knew it was Naraku all along... literally. I mean, READ THE TITLE EVERYONE!

I love your story so much it is the best!

it's so interesting

anyway plz review mine story too!

ciao

I WANT MORE. plz i want more. your EEvil for ending it there.