   Inuyasha-Is-The-Best-Show 5/8/04 . chapter 8Please write more... I like it... *checks the time on watch* YIKES! A NEW EPISODE OF INUYASHA IS ALMOST ON! Gotta go..
In the words of Shippo...
Shippo (doing her best dog eyes impression): Update soon... please... |
| Safreil 5/7/04 . chapter 8 Hahaha! Poor, Poor Inuyasha...hallucinating with on clue in the world. Well everything's so greta so far! But one miner detail..."Kohacu" is spelled "Kohaku" Sorry if i sound mean or anything , i meant ot tel lyou this before but it keeps slipping my mind. Gomen. Well plz continue...hahaha. |
| Safreil 5/4/04 . chapter 7 hahaha poor poor miroku...funny! Well plz keep it up! i like it. |
| remix-69er 5/3/04 . chapter 7 loved it please very very son...like i mean NOW! |
| Safreil 4/30/04 . chapter 6 Greeat chapter! Well this time the fic isn't in a block and so was last tiem so it was bettr. WEll plz keep it up, it was great! _ |
| remix-69er 4/29/04 . chapter 6 loved it...please please please update more... |
| talichernin 4/28/04 . chapter 6 LOL
ok, you could go in 2 directions here:
a. they get detension, whatever, get out, on with the story.
b. they get into a huge fight in detension, and are not allowed to go to the dance plus have detension every day for 2 weeks or something. a week's enough. :D obsticles are ALWAYS nice to keep a story going ;) |
| talichernin 4/26/04 . chapter 5 much better :D
can't wait to see how this develops ;) |
| Inuyasha-Is-The-Best-Show 4/26/04 . chapter 5 it's jusstt right. _ oh it just keeps getting better and better. before I knew it, I was at the end of the page. ahh who am I kidding, I'm addicted to your stories. DANG YOU! YOU'VE GIVEN ME A BAD HABBIT! j/k (In Other Words: I LIKE YOUR STORIES!) |
| remix-69er 4/26/04 . chapter 5 loved it please update! |
| Bloodlust79 4/25/04 . chapter 4 It is a nice story. who stabbed Kagome who? please write more i wanna know. |
| gothic inuyasha 4/24/04 . chapter 4 hey i liked this story please update soon and keep up the good work! |
| Safreil 4/23/04 . chapter 4 in great fic. There were some spelling errors but that's all. Also could you have more paragraphs instead of just a whole one paragraph long chapter? The format woul look way better. Other than those 2 lil probs you're great! Please continue! |
| talichernin 4/23/04 . chapter 4 hi! good job so far, but i do have some sugestions:
1. format the story better, ie- paragraphs, because it's very difficult to keep track when it's one big block and most poeple don't have the patience.
2. try not to make things so easy, ie- sango ageeing to date Miroku on the second chapter.
other then that, i think you're doign very well and should definately continue the story ;) |
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