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Miyth
2007-06-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis fic is really awesome. Your writting is very powerful and I greatly enjoyed this.

--Miyth
smithcrafter
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseWow! Well done.
Hikaru Kosuzaku
2006-12-20
ch 1,
abuseOkay, I realize I might be getting a little...stalkerish...but do you have to make me cry with EVERYTHING you write? Honestly...
Rebel Goddess
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abuseYou made me want to cry and then I read the Power Rangers line and started laughing. My favourite line is still "He could identify with the wind that slapped him back and forth, as it bargained for easier passage" though. The prose of this was so gorgeous and the subject so sad. Really great story. Wonderful. More please.
rikku-thief
2005-09-16
ch 1,
abuseAww that is really sweet and you are a very talented writer! Nice use of vocab! looking forward to an update

kat
x

PS, poor Janet! *sob*
Rinne
2005-06-02
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful, you have a way with words and emotions.
Lorraine474
2005-01-20
ch 1,
abuseAnother masterpiece - loved it! Only problem: you need to write more. I need more... MUAHAHAHA! Just kidding but seriously - you rock dude!
sharp-shooter-Spike
2004-12-15
ch 1,
abuseYou are an awsome writer and if you don't mind it would be cool if you could read my stories and tell me what you think about them. you are my hero and someday I aspire to write like you.
Mikazuki Senshi
2004-10-07
ch 1,
abuseaw, we are sad...
it's very well written, i like it a lot
q-tion though, were we supposed to take danny and janet as a pairing, or just as extremely close friends?
which ever, i still like it
^_~
banner
2004-06-21
ch 1,
abuseThis story was most enjoyable - kind and sympathetic, without being saccharine.
RUpuzzled2?
2004-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseYet another wonderfull story. sry im late reveiwing but just found this one. i liked it alot and i hope u continue to write here for us your fans if u wana put it like that
Debbie
2004-05-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey,
I meant to e-mail you this as soon as it was up, but forgot. Great, I really enjoy reading your stuff. And I did tell CelticAngel to read your stories, she said she would when she got time. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more!
rachelcooper
2004-04-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very good story. I like it very much. Stargate is one of my absolute favorite show! Heck, I think I may even try a Stargate fic when I finish the other two fics in other genres that I am working on. Keep up the great work!
Rachel :-)
normilou
2004-04-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseJust beautiful, really enjoyed the story and I thought you captured the characters personality with your writing. I am sure to look for more of your writing.
BizzyLizzy
2004-04-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was really good, deep and sad and yet hopeful at the same time.
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