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Reviews For: Silent Spaces, Quiet Rooms

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2005-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseman, what a lmae story
diskincluded (so what if I'...
2003-01-13
ch 2, anon.
abuseGood work. I have no flaws to complain about. I have a similar dream to Rei's, though. However, I'm on the banks, and it's me causing the death.
Kamialna
2002-12-11
ch 2, anon.
abusePlease continue! I'm a big Rei fan and I like the omake!
Usiel
2002-12-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou don't publish enough, Worldmage. I can't name half a dozen other people who write with so rich & steady a hand. Expand on this until it grows up to be something at least the size of a novella.
diskincluded
2001-04-15
ch 1,
abuseI won't shoot you for the omake, tempting though it may be. That definitely got my head spinning though. After all, anything can happen, because everything will happen. (a personal saying that i came up with, and if it's copyrighted anywhere, sorry, but i came up with this on my own, so there) but yeah, it's a good fic.
Anime Xianghua Rei
2001-01-23
ch 1,
abuseHI ^_^ It's me Anime Xianghia Rei!!!! ^_^ Finally a good Rei story ^_^ I just oh so love Rei Ayanami ^_^ I'm just just like to say that I somewhat didn't like that little Omake part ::glareing angerly:: but atleast it has Rei in it ::eyes all glazed anime like:: ^_^ Rei is forever ^_^
Derek Zischke
2001-01-21
ch 1,
abuseWow...*applauds*...That's certainly a very different take on Rei, most unlike anything I've ever seen. Very thought-provoking. You seem to have the knack of getting inside the character's well-worn heads and turning their thoughts at funny angles with a twist of perception...I love it.
Jillian
2001-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice fic. Although "He who hates worldmage" was rude, he does have a point. You do have a superior attitude about reviewing fics. But this was a good story, keep up the good work.
Ken Stokes
2001-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved the story, but this has to do with something (or rather "someone") else. You already know what I thought of the story Worldmage, so let me get to the point. That guy who decided to post that ugly flame was totally out of line. Believe it or not, moron, but people post their works here to be REVIEWED. If you can't handle your work being criticized constructively, then you aren't ready to publish. Just because you got a bad review (I'm assuming) doesn't give you the right to attack the reviewer's work. That's just petty and shows how immature you are. If I were in your shoes, I'd take the advise given to me and improve on my works... but somehow, I doubt you'd do that. Either do someone to negate those bad reviews or shut up and grow up.
Dave Ziegler
2001-01-20
ch 1,
abuseNice title. Okay, Rei IC comments. Well, aside from that fact that is a very interesting take on her character and motives (never really thought of her as having planned to purposely move against Gendo), I would say that the only thing that doesn't seem very Rei is her heavy use of contractions. Drop them, and you should be all set. Once again, quite an interesting look and view of Rei. I enjoyed the story.
GRUD
2001-01-20
ch 1,
abuseUh, okay. For starters, your omake was VERY weird. =) The main fic was very good, as well as intriguing. Also, extremly thought-provoking. It makes Rei seem almost spooky, talking about the medication and the electroshock therapy. "I am the pumpkin queen!" -Great line. =) Keep up the great work. C ya'!
Yih
2001-01-20
ch 1,
abuse
FierySable
2001-01-20
ch 1,
abuseHi worldmage! Great fic, really introspective and deep...*sigh* really good. Now, I know u said that flaming people is bad, but I'm gonna do it anyway. K' wad...whatever ur name is "HewhohatesWorldmages" or whatever, you are a complete @$$! As in "buta" as in "kono yaro" as in u were to frickin idiotic to even put a goddamn EMAIL ADRESS, u coward!! I happen to like this piece, and it seems to me the wee head of idiocy/jealousy is rearing its ugly three-forked head right now...ne? So what? U don't have perfect grammar and he's just trying to help, right? So shove it. If u don't like it, flame/talk in a personal email. Don't pollute the eva section with ur blah blah blah blah...we don't need/want to hear it! Gonna flame me? Come on, I dare u. If u look on my profile, you'll see every story i ever wrote. flame em! >:( I don't care.

To worldmage: Great fic again! Please write more and sooner? I really enjoyed reading it, it gave me a new perspective on Rei...*sigh* even though I'm an asuka-fan. Loved the fic! it's going on my favorites.
He who does not like Worldm...
2001-01-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseHello Worldmage. I wish to say something: you are an . You always talk about how great your grammer is and how much you know and your DAMN college major...get a damn grip on yourself. Even if you can stick it up everyone's **, no one gives a motherless . You are the damndest annoying in this ENTIRE site. I'm sorry if you are so perfect and we're not, but that's just the way the damn world turns. You have serious problems. I hate your "holier than thou" attitude about everything. We all know that everyone reads lemons and just doesn't review them, so as to not stray form "respectable" society! So don't tell us that you don't, ok! So next time you want to off about another grammer problem, know that no one cares but the undoubtedly ed up Worldmage. knowing you, you're probably gonna criticize this review for it's grammatical errors.
Yih
2001-01-20
ch 1,
abuseSeriously, Worldmage (THIS IS THE BEST THING YOU'VE WRITTEN!!!!!!!!: imho) Okay, here's is my WHYS: (1) I agree with your interpretation of Rei (2) I like the diary/journal thing (3) You write well (4) It was beautiful: not too overtly depressing because Rei never seems to FEEL greatly, but you indeed she does feel, she does think, she does have something going on inside of her! (5) You still aren't my favorite author (6) Disappointed? (7) Probably not (8) The omake was weird (9) But weird/funny is good (10) You know me ^_~
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