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Reviews For: Smoke Rings

Mittzy 2007-04-05 ch 1,	abusesweet story
Vicious-Loner 2005-03-27 ch 1,	abuseI've never seen this pairing before but it sure have caught my attention. Pleas update soon!
demon 2004-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is good. You should definitely continue it. I'm ot usually interested in this pairing, but your writing style is good in general. Good detail. I enjoyed it very much and am looking foreward to another chapter.
Mercedes no Inuarai 2004-04-26 ch 1,	abuseHmm, not bad. Ryuuji's a bit less playful than I'm used to seeing him, but, then again, Malik isn't exactly Honda, either. ^_^ . For the sheer hotness of the fic, it's definately enjoyable. Seme-Otogi is very... roar ^.~ . One thing I noticed in the Doom/Doma Arc: Ryuuji tends to cal people by nicnames when he can. I think he's spent too much time in the States L. Maybe work that in? ^.^
Sun Child Malik 2004-04-24 ch 1,	abuse::applauds:: I've never read OtogixMalik, mostly because I never find any. But this was worth reading, that's for sure. I like the way they were portrayed; I think you did a good job keeping them in character while still displaying what makes them interesting. Do you plan on writing more? This is a bad place to leave off. I'll be waiting if you do continue. ^^ (I know I suck at reviews... I haven't read anything in a while, so that's my excuse)
Skippys Cat 2004-04-24 ch 1,	abuseEven though it was short it definitely caught my attention. And I rarely ever balk at pairings unless they are actually squicky. This one is absolutely not squicky. With Ryuuji being another of Yami's victims even if they did end up friends in the end he and Malik do have something in common. Are you going to continue this story? I certainly hope so!
HellBunny 2004-04-24 ch 1,	abuseOoh write more, please! This is very good, I want to know what happens, though I hope it doesn't get too angsty...poor little Malik.

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